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When Her Yellow Meets My Blue
An unending glow wraps the silent moon
Her pull drags me near but I am still too far
Too far for her to hear my cries of joy
As I bask in her beauty
Too far to look into these hopeless eyes
Seeing my forgiving care
Forging into me to carry on
In a world that is unfair
But fairness isn't guaranteed
The righteous aren't always rewarded
And tomorrow isn't promised
As my thoughts dip into her goodness
As my lips mouth along to the song of her soul
I know all is well
And
I know all will be well
When your yellow meets my blue
Her pull drags me near but I am still too far
Too far for her to hear my cries of joy
As I bask in her beauty
Too far to look into these hopeless eyes
Seeing my forgiving care
Forging into me to carry on
In a world that is unfair
But fairness isn't guaranteed
The righteous aren't always rewarded
And tomorrow isn't promised
As my thoughts dip into her goodness
As my lips mouth along to the song of her soul
I know all is well
And
I know all will be well
When your yellow meets my blue
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Re. When Her Yellow Meets My Blue
11th Feb 2017 11:32pm
Beautiful tribute to La Femme de la Lune, Tim. It's almost indicative of an old hymn...all is well with my soul.
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12th Feb 2017 1:13am
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2017 11:36pm
So very beautiful.
A showering of serenity drizzled down...as these words were being read.
Outstanding ink, my friend.
A showering of serenity drizzled down...as these words were being read.
Outstanding ink, my friend.
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12th Feb 2017 2:41am
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2017 2:43am
Hey JT.....stunning beautiful ink......leaves a serene feeling that only luv can bring......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. When Her Yellow Meets My Blue
12th Feb 2017 5:40am
I have a strong connection with the moon, especially the full moon, and you did her honor!
Great write, Tim!
Great write, Tim!
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Re. When Her Yellow Meets My Blue
12th Feb 2017 1:20pm
The quiet nights of contemplation, basking in her glow...I don't know if there's anything more healing for me. Beautiful words :)
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Re. When Her Yellow Meets My Blue
13th Feb 2017 00:49am
'But fairness isn't guaranteed
The righteous aren't always rewarded
And tomorrow isn't promised'
So very true, a fitting expression...
The righteous aren't always rewarded
And tomorrow isn't promised'
So very true, a fitting expression...
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13th Feb 2017 1:11am