the door

Prophetic, Brenda.

thank you dearest Sage One.. love Brenda

"it is terrible and great times we are in"

all the better for poets

indeed it is Whale.. thank you.. love Brenda

Oh boy! You gave us mystery upon mystery, Brenda. This poem hearkened me back to the "beat" poetry I used to hear in the "Village," when I lived in New York back in tha day. Few words, but each and every one carries a simple, but important message to its audience. I like this very much. Down to earth even though it seemed surreal.

thank you graciously Jerry I could just imagine listening to the beat poets would be wonderful.. yes I've been shown what some of this symbolizes but not all as of yet.. so in part a mystery to me as well :) love Brenda

Dreamy drum roll comes to mind

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thank you dearest Poet :) love Brenda

I don't even know what to say about this one, Brenda, other than holy smokes.  There is far more behind your words here than meets the eye, I think.  Very much enjoyed!  Much love...  :)
Willow

thank you lovely Willow I love your response on this write :) love Brenda

Beautifuly composed!

thank you most kindly and welcome to du.. love Crim

dynamic poetry sparks from the fire of dreams, Crim;
I see the horsemen of the apocalypse riding...

thank you John yes in my dream I could hear their hooves pounding as they rode.. love Crim

O Crim, this piece truly gave me chills. Prophetic indeed.
Captivating delivery
Thought provoking ink.

thank you lovely Rooted One for feeling this write.. love Crim

Death, re-birth a great change is what I see when I read this.

thank you dearest Xmar I like your interpretation.. love Brenda

enthralling little poom.    G'odd bless ye, dearest!

thank you dearest Daniel.. love Brenda

Company B is wandering around in circles just outside the door ;)
Witty Write Dear Crim!!!

thank you dear Soul lol :) love Crim

thank you lovely Amelia for feeling this write gracious one.. love Crim

The Door seems spiritual/mystical. I'm seeing these visions in my dreams. I'm walking through a door of my own! It's a fascinating journey, is it not? ;) What a thought provoker! Nice work, Brenda!

thank you Chad yes indeed I think the door is very mystical in that we cross over to a new dimension.. love Brenda

Impressive, talented lady;
consider me thoroughly intrigued
and in awe of such elegance...

thank you graciously lovely Kasai.. love Crim

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece - we are in strange and difficult times - your poem leaves me with one abiding question  -who got the moon pregnant?

excellent ink :-)

thank you David.. see I believe the moon to be a living entity and it got pregnant with wisdom watching all that is unfolding here on Earth and in the cosmos.. love Brenda

Lovely Brenda.. spoken like a true prophetess.. into the list it goes.. love you my sister..




Dave

thank you Dave my brother :) love Brenda

The first two verses are my favourite. A lovely poem. Congratulations.

thank you I like those myself quite a bit.. love Crim

It's kind of like you're describing what your emotions  are seeing as you go through an epiphany as if emotions has eyes. Very mystical I love it. Nicely written poetry.

thank you most graciously.. love Crim