Dreamboat Annie (Heart respectively)

it is slight yet thick with lushness, gives the impression of a dreamlike yet melancholic state, fittingly.
i love the line "lust along many freckles"
good stuff mate

Appreciate Your kind words and time Good Sir!!! "Lush" indeed was key ;)

That means alot to me Dear Queen, I'm so glad You enjoyed this. I cant take all the credit for symmetry though-I had The Great editor Vee on board to keep me in check ;) As for magic...I can never step too far from it.

24...there's just something about that hr-I've had a few conversations about it...Magic to be sure-Always Appreciate Your time and Words!!!

Dreamlike quality Mister Soul, and perfect as it turned out to be without the excess..less is more as they say but then you always wrote the way it felt at the moment as poetry should be.

Hello lil Editor-in-Chief :* O to be sure the emotion is Always present, but I know myself well and l have been trying to Write a little denser than my usual scaled-down way...but looking at it i knew it was a bit extravagant (verbose) so The need for Your gilded shears was pertinent!!! Thank You Always!!!

The imagery sublime, the pace pure and persistent, when you're one with another your paradise is found. Wonderful pen

Appreciate the RL Jus T.!!! I'm glad You could feel this-Paradise is peace!!!

I can slip soo easily into this tender, rich fantasy world of yours...the imagery sensual,  luxurious, and lovely. The cadence carries the reader in a steady, perpetual pace from stanza to stanza--throughout each, and every moment of this vivid and emotionally pleasing piece!



And, i must say, the music selection, that served as inspiration--perhaps--is hauntingly beautiful. I not only became lost within the melody and the lyrics of the song,i found that when i re-read your piece, i could 'sense' the presence of Annabel's spirit softly drifting through this realm..


A stirring scribe--to be sure1

Awww DE thank You for catching the rhythm of this...timing of beats like a heart is the expression and quality of life!!! You are a Writer who expresses very much in this same manner, so for You to mention it-Well it just let me know positive that it was present!!! The song was second inspiration-but felt to tie easily in the crypto-emotion

Truly love this very beautiful, enchanting write.
Words which allow all of those warm fuzzies to surface and embrace perfectly.
A keeper for me.

Honoured by the RL and follow DRW!!! These types of Writes tend to be kind of my trade-mark style. The past couple i posted are far away from this lol partly because I tend to lean on these so heavily...but gosh how i love coming back. Most Appreciated!!!

Nancy & Ann
guitars & enchanted vocals in that field
even at 4am...

I was lucky enough to see them with the original line-up yrs ago. I liked their lead-guitarist at the time -Much Despite all these yrs the beauty of their music remains haunting for me!!!