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Love Lingers
Sweet melodies serenade my mind away
Times were simple and your smile was sweet
Nighttime flashed across the height of my heart
As your echos hummed along to our once true love
Ambient light flickers in the bare of my soul
And this vision is of two, that were meant to be
Life's pull grabbed hold and we were lost
But these feelings I hold for you remain steadfast
Love lingers longing to be one again
To be your knight fighting for your hand
How I miss your soft and sweet embrace
And the flowing of your mane
Here I wait, dancing alone with my dreams
Begging for one more gaze upon your eyes
One more trip into your heart. Pleading
One day you'll come and take me home
Times were simple and your smile was sweet
Nighttime flashed across the height of my heart
As your echos hummed along to our once true love
Ambient light flickers in the bare of my soul
And this vision is of two, that were meant to be
Life's pull grabbed hold and we were lost
But these feelings I hold for you remain steadfast
Love lingers longing to be one again
To be your knight fighting for your hand
How I miss your soft and sweet embrace
And the flowing of your mane
Here I wait, dancing alone with my dreams
Begging for one more gaze upon your eyes
One more trip into your heart. Pleading
One day you'll come and take me home
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Re. Love Lingers
4th Feb 2017 2:38pm
Such an abiding and aching love in your words here. It makes the heart weep in sadness.
Willow
Willow
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4th Feb 2017 2:57pm
Thank you dear...When we are without love sadness can be overwhelming at times.
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Anonymous
4th Feb 2017 2:55pm
These words pained my heart so very much.
The longing and hurting heart is felt so deeply.
Truly heartwrenching.
The longing and hurting heart is felt so deeply.
Truly heartwrenching.
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4th Feb 2017 3:00pm
Thank you for your beautiful comment...As you say to feel ones poem is the greatest of compliments...💕
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4th Feb 2017 4:10pm
There is always a period of adjustment following separation - half hope half agony before it resolves into peaceful acceptance. I felt the depth of the current in this one, Tim.
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4th Feb 2017 4:31pm
It is harder when you still see them often...Thank you Ahavati...Have a lovely Saturday
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Anonymous
4th Feb 2017 5:44pm
I know sometimes that empty space inside can't be ignored. A pen is a good form of release in those times and you've done it well here. I agree with the first reviewer, there is an aching in your words.
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4th Feb 2017 6:11pm
This is beautiful, the person who's love is being yearned for I hope returns!
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9th Feb 2017 1:13am
Hey JT......gorgeous ink with a tint of sadness.......brought a tear......enjoyed....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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