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Dreaming Of Venus
She wrapped her lips around the head of the long-necked bottle
sucking back white frothy foam and the last drips of its golden aged perfection.
Her eyes moved seductively to the corner where I lay, bound helpless by silk scarves and naked for over an hour, my cock taut purple; ready to peel out of its skin.
Earlier as She had coaxed me onto the bed and secured me to it, she began winding a purple ribbon round and about my jewels slowly forming a barber pole pattern to the length of my girth; fashioning a knot just under the head.
She said, "when Your meat matches the colour of its prison, you'll be ready for proper carnal knowledge."
The wicks of the candles danced by ceiling fan as flames coursed their way up my inches, spreading heat across my whole body, my mind was with constant struggle, trapped in trance by her legs and slow measured clicks; to her heels that stood straight buckled at the calf wrapping the white of my eyes to ultimate sin.
She leaned over the bed letting her sheer blouse fall open, just enough for my tongue to produce copious amounts of juice; the delicate fingers trimmed by French allure, slowly unwrapped my throbbing flesh, not once looking away for me to lose myself in her eyes; I glistened.
Whispering heated tones with nuzzle to my ear, her tongue explored the notes welling up from my throat; a nail then two scraping the twitching flesh, rubbing a soft forefinger to collect her owned juices that leaked profusely from my member.
~She swirled a collection mixing the lotion between both hands, plunging one hand to part my lips and the other to hers locking eyes with an animals moan.~
Lifting her leg she slid her shin and shoe along my thigh and stomach,
Positioning herself to straddle my body.
Her shining fingers slowly raised up the ebony skirt, showing off the beauty that embodied the elixir in bare cunning fashion; I melted savoring this view and what was to come.
Eyes locked in level till she rose up grasping my hair into a clenched grip, guiding my head, lips, tongue and breath to inhale and exhale every bit of living heaven; it was her world and she let me know it, grinding my face and steering my locks as my tongue lavished and flickered with hum and absolution.
I sucked at the sides of her butterflied lips between each treasured lick holding a lock to her push-start button to begin the type of moan I feverishly desired to hear;
Her grip tightened and clawed between my hair as I popped my lips fervently darting my tongue to match her flutter.
The world breathed and pulsed matched by my own pumping blood, reaching in screams as the decent of the waterfall lay flood covering and filling all below; this was my mess to clean up and hungrily though gently, I consumed all that was delivered.
~She came down from the heavens like the Goddess she was, turning from man only to smirk at his allegiance.~
The holy temple now empty, she sought to rectify this instantly, raising herself up to hover the ivory tower; slowly descending with cries from us both that split the night, her Nirvana closing tight around my Manna, she roamed the length with slow twist and a heartbeat pulse to a rocking-horse ride.
~The buck of the stallion kicked as she began to gallop, reaching for the perfect speed with which to run wild~
Throbs beckoned as I clenched my teeth, thumping harder to shoo them away.
Her ass danced with spirited rhythm while moans, grunts and Oh's escaped from the dance floor.
The drips of gasoline lit she grabbed tight to my sides; this told me we were headed straight for the first sunset.
~Fires burning hot we sweat out every impure deed that lusted within our eye~
The grounds shook with the rumble
and screams were heard by every neighbor, the walls rattled with picture-perfect travesty; as we both exploded like the very first mountains, enraptured by the spilling over laying waste to all within and out.
~Ties unwind and other wraps begin to bear presence, as the kisses deliver and the occasional nip, works it's way back to where all heavenly birthdays began~
sucking back white frothy foam and the last drips of its golden aged perfection.
Her eyes moved seductively to the corner where I lay, bound helpless by silk scarves and naked for over an hour, my cock taut purple; ready to peel out of its skin.
Earlier as She had coaxed me onto the bed and secured me to it, she began winding a purple ribbon round and about my jewels slowly forming a barber pole pattern to the length of my girth; fashioning a knot just under the head.
She said, "when Your meat matches the colour of its prison, you'll be ready for proper carnal knowledge."
The wicks of the candles danced by ceiling fan as flames coursed their way up my inches, spreading heat across my whole body, my mind was with constant struggle, trapped in trance by her legs and slow measured clicks; to her heels that stood straight buckled at the calf wrapping the white of my eyes to ultimate sin.
She leaned over the bed letting her sheer blouse fall open, just enough for my tongue to produce copious amounts of juice; the delicate fingers trimmed by French allure, slowly unwrapped my throbbing flesh, not once looking away for me to lose myself in her eyes; I glistened.
Whispering heated tones with nuzzle to my ear, her tongue explored the notes welling up from my throat; a nail then two scraping the twitching flesh, rubbing a soft forefinger to collect her owned juices that leaked profusely from my member.
~She swirled a collection mixing the lotion between both hands, plunging one hand to part my lips and the other to hers locking eyes with an animals moan.~
Lifting her leg she slid her shin and shoe along my thigh and stomach,
Positioning herself to straddle my body.
Her shining fingers slowly raised up the ebony skirt, showing off the beauty that embodied the elixir in bare cunning fashion; I melted savoring this view and what was to come.
Eyes locked in level till she rose up grasping my hair into a clenched grip, guiding my head, lips, tongue and breath to inhale and exhale every bit of living heaven; it was her world and she let me know it, grinding my face and steering my locks as my tongue lavished and flickered with hum and absolution.
I sucked at the sides of her butterflied lips between each treasured lick holding a lock to her push-start button to begin the type of moan I feverishly desired to hear;
Her grip tightened and clawed between my hair as I popped my lips fervently darting my tongue to match her flutter.
The world breathed and pulsed matched by my own pumping blood, reaching in screams as the decent of the waterfall lay flood covering and filling all below; this was my mess to clean up and hungrily though gently, I consumed all that was delivered.
~She came down from the heavens like the Goddess she was, turning from man only to smirk at his allegiance.~
The holy temple now empty, she sought to rectify this instantly, raising herself up to hover the ivory tower; slowly descending with cries from us both that split the night, her Nirvana closing tight around my Manna, she roamed the length with slow twist and a heartbeat pulse to a rocking-horse ride.
~The buck of the stallion kicked as she began to gallop, reaching for the perfect speed with which to run wild~
Throbs beckoned as I clenched my teeth, thumping harder to shoo them away.
Her ass danced with spirited rhythm while moans, grunts and Oh's escaped from the dance floor.
The drips of gasoline lit she grabbed tight to my sides; this told me we were headed straight for the first sunset.
~Fires burning hot we sweat out every impure deed that lusted within our eye~
The grounds shook with the rumble
and screams were heard by every neighbor, the walls rattled with picture-perfect travesty; as we both exploded like the very first mountains, enraptured by the spilling over laying waste to all within and out.
~Ties unwind and other wraps begin to bear presence, as the kisses deliver and the occasional nip, works it's way back to where all heavenly birthdays began~
Published 1st Feb 2017
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Anonymous
1st Feb 2017 3:18pm
...who is she and what's her name?? lol
To write something like this from a man who writes in metaphors and riddles and nature as his blanket..this is quite a phenomenal write Mister Soul, setting this place on fire. Erotica at its best, a perfect mix of eloquence, love, romance and dirtyyy lol
To write something like this from a man who writes in metaphors and riddles and nature as his blanket..this is quite a phenomenal write Mister Soul, setting this place on fire. Erotica at its best, a perfect mix of eloquence, love, romance and dirtyyy lol
1st Feb 2017 3:45pm
Hehehe I'd tell You my secrets but i don't have any from You do i? :* I am humbled by Your praise...Other sides of me need to be Written of at times eh? (says the man w/o mask)
omg...heart-beats increasing...breath quickening...and somehow, the room has definitely become quite warm!! I do believe the windows are fogged! (LOL!)
Hot and 'nasty'....naughty...but O, soooo 'n.i.c.e.' For someone who is finely tuned into nature..whose poetry melds metaphors with the mysterious... this so surely 'exposes' the erotic element within your personality--( pun intended...LOL! )
3rd stanza...3rd line...is my fav! Just enough of the unexpected to catch me a bit off guard! (Actually smiled...right out loud!!!)
Indeed--this is a 'sinfully' sensuous scribe!
Truly enjoyed this sexy side of you, my friend! (Perhaps you might be willing to share more of it in the future??? ) :p
Hot and 'nasty'....naughty...but O, soooo 'n.i.c.e.' For someone who is finely tuned into nature..whose poetry melds metaphors with the mysterious... this so surely 'exposes' the erotic element within your personality--( pun intended...LOL! )
3rd stanza...3rd line...is my fav! Just enough of the unexpected to catch me a bit off guard! (Actually smiled...right out loud!!!)
Indeed--this is a 'sinfully' sensuous scribe!
Truly enjoyed this sexy side of you, my friend! (Perhaps you might be willing to share more of it in the future??? ) :p
2nd Feb 2017 4:40pm
You indulge my ego too much Dear!!! I almost didn't publish this, but people don't see this side of me very often -they tend to be saved for the private. But I figured it would be something "different" to share. Appreciate You Always-Glad I could make You smile out loud and turn the heat up a lil. :)
Anonymous
8th Feb 2017 5:54pm
O myyyyy...
Holymotherofallorgasmicgods 🔥
This is a true erotic masterpiece.
One in which you can taste, feel and deeply crave.
Your detail and flawless imagery is so very impressive.
Holymotherofallorgasmicgods 🔥
This is a true erotic masterpiece.
One in which you can taste, feel and deeply crave.
Your detail and flawless imagery is so very impressive.
8th Feb 2017 6:02pm
(blush) Kind You are!!! I don't Write Erotica...the rare times i do, it tends to be nature-based cryptic. This was my attempt to try raw. I'm very pleased it was enjoyed, that lets my ego know im not a one-trick pony!!!
Anonymous
8th Feb 2017 6:26pm
"One - trick pony" .....** giggling* Indeed you are not. That pony tail should consider dipping into these waters once again. Well done.
