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Wisdom
rolling hills
the color of gold
my eyes close
as I meditate
old oak trees
lined with wisdom
they have seen
many fires
in the dry season
yet they survive
some seeds only produce
after the burning
so it may be also with the soul
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Re. Wisdom
Anonymous
31st Jan 2017 4:10pm
Absolutely love this write.
So much depth and meaning in these words.
Beautiful expression.
A keeper for me.
So much depth and meaning in these words.
Beautiful expression.
A keeper for me.
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1st Feb 2017 3:56pm
Re. Wisdom
I immediately thought of this, Brenda.
Kahlil Gibran on Love
When love beckons to you, follow him,
Though his ways are hard and steep.
And when his wings enfold you yield to him,
Though the sword hidden among his pinions may wound you.
And when he speaks to you believe in him,
Though his voice may shatter your dreams
as the north wind lays waste the garden.
For even as love crowns you so shall he crucify you. Even as he is for your growth so is he for your pruning.
Even as he ascends to your height and caresses your tenderest branches that quiver in the sun,
So shall he descend to your roots and shake them in their clinging to the earth.
Like sheaves of corn he gathers you unto himself.
He threshes you to make you naked.
He sifts you to free you from your husks.
He grinds you to whiteness.
He kneads you until you are pliant;
And then he assigns you to his sacred fire, that you may become sacred bread for God's sacred feast.
All these things shall love do unto you that you may know the secrets of your heart, and in that knowledge become a fragment of Life's heart.
[...]
http://www.katsandogz.com/onlove.html
Kahlil Gibran on Love
When love beckons to you, follow him,
Though his ways are hard and steep.
And when his wings enfold you yield to him,
Though the sword hidden among his pinions may wound you.
And when he speaks to you believe in him,
Though his voice may shatter your dreams
as the north wind lays waste the garden.
For even as love crowns you so shall he crucify you. Even as he is for your growth so is he for your pruning.
Even as he ascends to your height and caresses your tenderest branches that quiver in the sun,
So shall he descend to your roots and shake them in their clinging to the earth.
Like sheaves of corn he gathers you unto himself.
He threshes you to make you naked.
He sifts you to free you from your husks.
He grinds you to whiteness.
He kneads you until you are pliant;
And then he assigns you to his sacred fire, that you may become sacred bread for God's sacred feast.
All these things shall love do unto you that you may know the secrets of your heart, and in that knowledge become a fragment of Life's heart.
[...]
http://www.katsandogz.com/onlove.html
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Re: Re. Wisdom
1st Feb 2017 3:57pm
thank you dearest Sage One for knowing what my spirit needed to hear at that moment.. I deeply appreciate the link I went and read it all the way though so much divine wisdom to be gained there.. love Brenda
Re. Wisdom
31st Jan 2017 4:15pm
"some seeds only produce
after the burning
so it may be also with the soul "
true so true... this poem embodies wisdom, no attaining pure gold unless put through fire. Spoke to me wise and clear! Thank you Brenda for this gem of a read!!
regards
KDAmB
after the burning
so it may be also with the soul "
true so true... this poem embodies wisdom, no attaining pure gold unless put through fire. Spoke to me wise and clear! Thank you Brenda for this gem of a read!!
regards
KDAmB
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1st Feb 2017 3:59pm
thank you KDAmB I fail often in this world at doing the right thing.. have been through the fire many times and still am not solid gold.. Nature teaches us so much if we are listening.. I appreciate you my friend.. love Brenda
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31st Jan 2017 6:30pm
Terrific piece...It brought to mind a documentary I watched a few years ago where some rare exotic mushrooms only grow after a forest fire...Makes you think that some good can come out of bad.
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1st Feb 2017 4:01pm
thank you Tim yes I think we if we want to can gain knowledge from the bad.. love Crim
Re. Wisdom
Admired the wisdom you delivered in this short, but powerful bit of poetical insight . . .
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31st Jan 2017 8:51pm
it's all beautiful, if we can keep the gold in the hills
& the fire out of the forest; wonderful, Crim...
& the fire out of the forest; wonderful, Crim...
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1st Feb 2017 2:56pm
I just watched a documentary about forest fires and just this thing! What a beautiful observation, Brenda! You have, I think touched on a very hopeful and powerful concept. Much love, my lady :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Wisdom
1st Feb 2017 4:06pm
thank you lovely Willow when my heart is heavy I meditate and write and this is what came.. love you lady :) love Brenda
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1st Feb 2017 7:08pm
Just as in nature, so too in the soul of mankind.
We find beauty there after the flames have gone.
You've done an amazing job, talented lady...
We find beauty there after the flames have gone.
You've done an amazing job, talented lady...
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2nd Feb 2017 2:53pm
this has deep beauty and a wish to reincarnate but what if your next incarnation is worse (yikes) :-)
fabulous ink :-)
fabulous ink :-)
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5th Feb 2017 7:19am
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Anonymous
4th Feb 2017 4:00pm
Brenda.. so much brilliance, and depth.. blown away.. into the list it goes.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
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5th Feb 2017 7:20am