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Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
tree just does what's 'right'
wit'out th'ought or (damned) preconception,
wit'out
posturing toward what is
left
( behind )
wit'out th'ought or (damned) preconception,
wit'out
posturing toward what is
left
( behind )
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Re: Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
30th Jan 2017 6:46pm
Ed I could so easily apply this deep message to myself..
excellent..
love Brenda
excellent..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
5th Feb 2017 1:08am
Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
31st Jan 2017 3:57pm
What an astonishing observation, Ed. It so aptly applies to human nature as well.
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Re: Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
31st Jan 2017 7:52pm
The intent was to align with human nature. Letting go when we have to and face the tough times when we must... thanks...
Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
4th Feb 2017 9:08pm
A wise message here Ed, maybe if some didn't cling onto the shade for so long, they would find what else is waiting. Great work.
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Re: Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
15th Mar 2017 11:29am
Ed...what an impassioned Haiku
I am taking away the idea that we must release the idea of what we imagine we are supposed to be so we can be who we actually are...despite winter struggles... ? Nonetheless, I feel wiser from your words.
Thanks for sharing
I am taking away the idea that we must release the idea of what we imagine we are supposed to be so we can be who we actually are...despite winter struggles... ? Nonetheless, I feel wiser from your words.
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
16th Mar 2017 1:08am
It could be read that way, but my contention was sometimes we have to let things go even though we don't want to... Thanks so much for your kind words and read... -ed
Re. -winters embrace (Haiku)
Anonymous
15th May 2017 9:32am
I'm a huge fan of nature writes particularly Haiku's when they're a metaphor for life, this is a wonderfully penned piece that Komachi would've loved.
Awesome.
Ben
Awesome.
Ben
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