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EMTINESS RISING
This emptiness
opening wider each day
consumed in decaying surroundings around me
opening up new words and worlds to display
Dead yesterday
eventually fading further away
There's always new words to say
And emptiness waiting to echo on into forever
opening wider each day
consumed in decaying surroundings around me
opening up new words and worlds to display
Dead yesterday
eventually fading further away
There's always new words to say
And emptiness waiting to echo on into forever
Published 24th Jan 2017
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25th Jan 2017 7:34am
Very bleak picture. I like it. Check my shit out and let me know if you wanna work together sometime.
25th Jan 2017 7:47am
25th Jan 2017 10:42am
I love the concept of emptiness actually rising - this has got my creative juices going this morning. TY
excellent piece :-)
excellent piece :-)
27th Jan 2017 7:05am
It's been awhile archetype23 since I visited your words and I can see that the loss is mine...i've enjoyed reading the 'last page' of your poems...it appears something very interesting is happening to you or in your life, like a door has 'opened' enabling you to tap into 'something' different...hmm, maybe it's just my perspective changing ;-)
