charcoal melancholy

This is truly captivating.
I love the passion which drips from every syllable.

"we mixed
gave birth to poetic sunsets
with our lust

*

he came to me
put to death my lonely days "


I know the depths of those words and how life changing they truly are.

Beautiful ink.

thank you Rooted one for feeling this write.. I am very passionate about this poet.. love Crim

an ode done with beauty and justice to perfection.. a lovely expression indeed Brenda! deep and evocative!

thank you most graciously KDAmB :) love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda!! Oh this is just stunning! Magnificent!! Every single word felt so deeply! These lines!!!! THESE LINES!!!

THAT'S MY GIRL!!!!

"as he entered my watercolor days  
with his bold oils  
*
& we mixed  
gave birth to poetic sunsets  
with our lust
*
he came to me  
put to death my lonely days"

I love you so much!!

Xoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one for showing me and this poem your love :) I love you so much!!! xo Brenda

Fantastic, Brenda! And I sincerely hope this attitude and feelings stay with you forevermore!

thank you graciously Jerry :) love Brenda

Your light shines bright Dear Crim!!!
You carry the ambiance of every avenue-and forest...Gifts

Lots of love on this page!!!

thank you dearest Soul for gracing my pages with such a beautiful comment.. love Crim

you have such a way of beautifully stating darkness :-)

thank you David love to you my friend :) xo Brenda

& we mixed  
gave birth to poetic sunsets  
with our lust  

he came to me  
put to death my lonely days  
   (Holy mother of all things beautifully artistic!!! Those are some sharp words, my friend!!)  

What a fine piece elegant word art!

thank you most graciously Chad :) love Brenda

Woman!.. . I wish someone would
write like this for me ;-D

damnnnn it!!! , you are so beautiful
and this so deliciously gorgeous..
I'm melt'd and you're always giving  
me chills. Gawd how this part of you
seeps beneath

sweetburningfuckingsaints.. . sigh..

ok,th'lady's shushing now



-Howlings

aw thank you lovely Howlings absolutely love your comment :) love Crim

love & inspiration come from distances;
it's wondrous to begin, Crim,
& sensuous thru the stanzas
& the murder at the end is sublime...

aw thank you John for such a beautiful comment :) love Crim

Outstanding last lines to a breathtakingly beautiful poem!

Not only did you refer to words, but also to art and music... love this piece, dear Crim!

Love, Duende

thank you dearest Duende love that you picked up on that because he is all three poet, artist and musician.. love Crim

It is a wonderful feeling to have the lonely days filled. A person with a wicked pin can be dangerous though 😉

Great write, Crim

thank you DC.. love Crim

The art, the verse, the emotion= a 'perfect storm' all it's own! :)

thank you dearest Poe :) love Crim

ah beautiful one, you make me believe in love here
such intense verses, packed full of gorgeous imagery
loved it
xo

thank you beautiful one this is a love of one I can never truly have I don't know if this type of hunger and passion ever truly dies.. love Brenda

i'll tell you from experience, it sticks with ya for good, like shit to a wool blanket o.O

giggles beautiful one I thought that was the case.. love Brenda

To be touched so deeply by one is a true gift indeed.  I believe he brought you balance, sweet Brenda.  And you grace us with such beautiful gifts as this gem.  Truly beautiful, lovely one  :)
Much love
Willow

thank you lovely Willow yes his art and the person he is brings me joy.. I am grateful to know him he did come at a tough time in my life.. love Brenda

I applaud you, Lady Crim. Your iink never ceases to amaze me.

thank you my Darkest Lord you bring me smiles :) love Crim

Brenda.. simply blown away.. this is brilliant, and beautiful.. love you..



Dave

thank you graciously Dave :) love Brenda