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ROSE BREAKING VIOLENTLY
Darkness rose violently
as Rose retreated silently
It was her breaking up with me
not me setting darkness free
I watched the waters as dark waves rose
then violently breaking upon the sea
Brilliant beauty is all I see
Perfection breaking violently
roses rising silently, ecstatically
and Rose breaking violently
as Rose retreated silently
It was her breaking up with me
not me setting darkness free
I watched the waters as dark waves rose
then violently breaking upon the sea
Brilliant beauty is all I see
Perfection breaking violently
roses rising silently, ecstatically
and Rose breaking violently
Published 16th Jan 2017
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16th Jan 2017 4:57pm
I didn't realize I posted this already. My mind and everything around me is pretty messed up right now
17th Jan 2017 3:57am
17th Jan 2017 4:45am
I wrote this for a challenge using the words ROSE BREAKING VIOLENTLY and so that was the title and the content
7th Jul 2019 8:24am
Of course I had no chance of winning, because I am not a little bitch with a trust fund or a rich Daddy.
Hmmmm, soft hum of finality, and honestly sung reality.................
Hmmmm, soft hum of finality, and honestly sung reality.................
