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Rose Breaking Violently
Darkness rose violently
as Rose retreated silently
It was her breaking up with me
not me setting darkness free
I watched the waters
as dark waves rose
then violently breaking upon the sea
Brilliant perfection is all I see
pure beauty breaking violently
Roses risen silently
and Rose breaking silently
as Rose retreated silently
It was her breaking up with me
not me setting darkness free
I watched the waters
as dark waves rose
then violently breaking upon the sea
Brilliant perfection is all I see
pure beauty breaking violently
Roses risen silently
and Rose breaking silently
Published 16th Jan 2017
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16th Jan 2017 6:46pm
awesome poem - sad, passionate and of course violent - darkness takes many forms, none of them good :-(
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
