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The blue faced lady
She slowly began to loose all feeling,
She had not thought she'd actually lose hope,
The ambiguity of the situation was slowly depleting,
She only sought nirvana as she finally let go of the rope.
She had not thought she'd actually lose hope,
The ambiguity of the situation was slowly depleting,
She only sought nirvana as she finally let go of the rope.
Published 15th Jan 2017
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15th Jan 2017 12:54pm
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17th Jan 2017 11:02am
Very much appreciated, especially from one such as yourself who has her way with words.
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16th Jan 2017 4:48pm
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17th Jan 2017 11:01am
Much appreciated friendo. Hoping to make better ones soon enough, I just need to expand my vocabulary seeing as english isn't my first language.
16th Jan 2017 6:40pm
a fascinating explanation of the title – leaves lots of room to interpret
an excellent well constructed poem with a dark underbelly :-)
an excellent well constructed poem with a dark underbelly :-)
17th Jan 2017 11:04am
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22nd Jan 2017 12:25pm
Much appreciated, thanks for the great comment, hoping to make more to impress. :^)
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