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Blooming Reactions

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Felt the rhythmic slide
along a blooming bud
heard the skin against skin
hitting deep as I moved to greet
with welcoming moan

Till like everytime the rhythm
ceased to a murmuring shudder

My blooming bud in reaction
as skin pressed against skin

Like he wasn't in control of the
emotional moment

Though I know this to be true
because I was travelling away
with him someplace else more
beautiful right then


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