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SATurATEd Pussy
He SAT me on the table
and ATE my pussy good
on bended knees
he ate me out
like I knew he would
I moaned,he groaned
I moaned some more
my pussy's getting wet
I wiped his forehead
with a towel
after seeing sweat
he ate me
like a savage beast
his head shook
side to side
he ate me like
a final meal
too good to say goodbye
the more he ate
the more I moaned
no question
he's the one
who can eat this ass
prolong the time
and make this
pussy cum
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
and ATE my pussy good
on bended knees
he ate me out
like I knew he would
I moaned,he groaned
I moaned some more
my pussy's getting wet
I wiped his forehead
with a towel
after seeing sweat
he ate me
like a savage beast
his head shook
side to side
he ate me like
a final meal
too good to say goodbye
the more he ate
the more I moaned
no question
he's the one
who can eat this ass
prolong the time
and make this
pussy cum
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Published 13th Jan 2017
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13th Jan 2017 1:59pm
Mmmmmmm.......your work chronicles some scintillating sexual escapades and you spare no modesty in your portrayal. There are many on this site (just keeping it real) that will trivialize what you write and won't give you serious consideration. Make sure you write what you write for you while on the DU. Real truth and sincerity will go a long way to your development as a writer or poet......no matter what the category is. Just my critical .02 cents :-)
Passion has to burn between your ears and your thighs 24-7 to create the things you write. A saturated pussy has to be a man's best friend. Down right therapeutic.......the way it soothes your intimate flesh, moisturizes the tools of pleasure. Easing the stiction, yielding a greater velocity in each and every thrust. Lawd.....let me stop . LOL. You are making it so "hard" to leave this post. U have found a fan in me :-)
Passion has to burn between your ears and your thighs 24-7 to create the things you write. A saturated pussy has to be a man's best friend. Down right therapeutic.......the way it soothes your intimate flesh, moisturizes the tools of pleasure. Easing the stiction, yielding a greater velocity in each and every thrust. Lawd.....let me stop . LOL. You are making it so "hard" to leave this post. U have found a fan in me :-)
13th Jan 2017 10:12pm
I sincerely appreciate your thoughts and you are correct triple M,writing is a true PASSION of mine,and a NATURAL FLOWING GIFT.You hit home with your words,and I will most certainly KEEP IT REAL with my fans.You need to realize that what you just said,speaks truth,I will NEVER water down my WORDS fore they are what I feel,and therefore must say.Smile
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