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Eternal Ink
silent are our voices as I dream
it's just you & me under purple moon light
stars are blinking celebrating with us
there's not a sound or even a whisper
looking into your shinning emerald eyes
as our smiles meet with erotic passion
chest to breasts our bodies sway
hearts pressed together against warm skin
they hum sweet music our luv creates
how beautiful they sing from words you write
inked with luv from your heart to mine
imprinted within me to read for eternity
Inspiration ~ a comment by my sweet Bee
"My heart is an open book for my flower to read whenever she chooses."
it's just you & me under purple moon light
stars are blinking celebrating with us
there's not a sound or even a whisper
looking into your shinning emerald eyes
as our smiles meet with erotic passion
chest to breasts our bodies sway
hearts pressed together against warm skin
they hum sweet music our luv creates
how beautiful they sing from words you write
inked with luv from your heart to mine
imprinted within me to read for eternity
Inspiration ~ a comment by my sweet Bee
"My heart is an open book for my flower to read whenever she chooses."
Published 13th Jan 2017
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13th Jan 2017 11:25am
Such an endearing poem filled with pure love...
Perfect placement of 'hum' :-)
This might be my favorite of yours so far, it made my heart smile
Perfect placement of 'hum' :-)
This might be my favorite of yours so far, it made my heart smile
16th Jan 2017 3:55am
Awe Duende......thank you so much for showering such luv upon this ink......I'm thrilled it touches you so much......honored by the RL add on.......sending you heart smiles back......purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Jan 2017 12:42pm
Your love is beautiful music, you and your sweet bee. :) Very heart warming on this cold Nebraska morning, lovely petal :)
Willow
Willow
16th Jan 2017 3:58am
Hey Willow.......I'm so glad this warmed your heart........Bee is very romantic and luving.....always makes my heart sing......thank you for the warm luv and smile upon my ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
What can I say except this is the true you who penned this sweet, reaching poem about love and all it enfolds. You have such a wonderful way with words, dear flower.
16th Jan 2017 4:02am
Awe Jerry.......thank you my dear friend for such warm words you leave me........I'm truly honored by your thoughts......purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Jan 2017 6:11pm
Poems are eternity Purple One. They burn their meanings into us like rings in a tree forever depicting the time in our lives.
16th Jan 2017 4:09am
Hey Ahavati........what beautiful thoughts you leave me......thank you for sharing wonderful words that make me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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13th Jan 2017 6:47pm
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Hey Adam.......thank you for your graceful words.......Bee writes the most romantic words......he's a wonderful poet who is very precious to me......glad you enjoyed my ink as well.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Jan 2017 11:47pm
17th Jan 2017 2:29am
Hey 23.......I'm touched as always for your smile upon my page.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Jan 2017 00:15am
...soft sentiments and lovely-lavender-lines in this romantic nugget.
Much enjoyed! :)
Much enjoyed! :)
17th Jan 2017 2:36am
Hey Rain.......thank you for smiling upon my ink.........I'm so happy you enjoyed this......Bee is such a sweet inspiration.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Jan 2017 1:45am
I really enjoy how you draw so much inspiration from your connections to others.
17th Jan 2017 2:40am
Awe Daniel........I luv to be inspired......to be able to feel within another soul is awesome.......so happy you enjoyed......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Jan 2017 4:16am
what a beautiful love hymn - I found myself lost in it, it was nice to bathe in love an beauty for a short while :-)
excellent ink - ehugs on their way :-)
excellent ink - ehugs on their way :-)
17th Jan 2017 2:43am
Awe David.......I'm honored and humbled by your gracious words........I'm glad I cold take you to a beautiful place.......even for a little while.......thank you so much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Jan 2017 1:05pm
17th Jan 2017 2:46am
Thank you X.......I have to admit......I do like romance.......thank you for smiling upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
14th Jan 2017 2:09pm
This was a nice poem to read today, thanks for sharing it with us.
17th Jan 2017 2:47am
Hey Mo......I so appreciate your visit......I'm thrilled you enjoyed this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Jan 2017 9:52pm
You and Bee have real chemistry sweet Flower. I always love your romantic and erotic lines, the purple passion:
chest to breasts our bodies sway
hearts pressed together against warm skin
they hum sweet music our luv creates
This is one for the ages, fine lady. My own ink's pretty temporary...
chest to breasts our bodies sway
hearts pressed together against warm skin
they hum sweet music our luv creates
This is one for the ages, fine lady. My own ink's pretty temporary...
17th Jan 2017 2:53am
Hey Crow......you always leave me humbled.......Bee & Me definitely have chemistry.......he's a wonderful poet and very sacred to me.......thank you for honoring my ink with your words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
BTW.......your writes are YOU......never change them.......keep inking and giving us joy to read them......xo :)
BTW.......your writes are YOU......never change them.......keep inking and giving us joy to read them......xo :)
16th Jan 2017 8:07pm
17th Jan 2017 2:55am
My sweet precious friend......Faith I'm thrilled to see you again.......thank you for the smile and graceful words upon my ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
