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Ugly overdose
Please forgive me, ugly overdose,
I will never miss you
I will always remember you.
You built the earth of my feelings
you destroyed the happiness of my outlook
and now you ask for some holly forgiveness
like you never hold my tears on your back
like you never touched my delirium
while it was filming my white nonsense.
Please forget me, ugly overdose,
I will never feel you again
I will always disrespect you.
You destroyed what is called “future”
you built my anonymous faith
and now I pray to lost gods
as if I was a meatloaf, waiting for its honey,
as if I was an umbrella, seeking for simple rain
while I was my own dude kind of sunny thing.
Please trust me, I’ll be nice with destiny,
please hate me, I’ll be bad with the acceptance.
**written for the "Youth" comp. of UnknownEmo.
I will never miss you
I will always remember you.
You built the earth of my feelings
you destroyed the happiness of my outlook
and now you ask for some holly forgiveness
like you never hold my tears on your back
like you never touched my delirium
while it was filming my white nonsense.
Please forget me, ugly overdose,
I will never feel you again
I will always disrespect you.
You destroyed what is called “future”
you built my anonymous faith
and now I pray to lost gods
as if I was a meatloaf, waiting for its honey,
as if I was an umbrella, seeking for simple rain
while I was my own dude kind of sunny thing.
Please trust me, I’ll be nice with destiny,
please hate me, I’ll be bad with the acceptance.
**written for the "Youth" comp. of UnknownEmo.
Published 11th Jan 2017
| Edited 12th Jan 2017
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12th Jan 2017 00:03am
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12th Jan 2017 1:31pm
This was very painful to read!
Having said that: those last two lines blew me away and the repetition of "Please..." makes this a really strong poem!
I commend you on having the courage to write this and release it!
Having said that: those last two lines blew me away and the repetition of "Please..." makes this a really strong poem!
I commend you on having the courage to write this and release it!
12th Jan 2017 8:48pm
