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You weren't an innocent angel
" she will be just like you were when u were 14, you weren't an innocent angel"
no.. Your wrong i was innocent.
Other people weather it was older or younger then me, they were cruel to me.
living with the cruel words of others being wispered around you is terrible..
But then ..Someone had finally looked at me.. Remembered my name ....said that they loved me...
An for once i was happy.
Of course i didnt want to let that go, no matter what anyone said about it i was determined not to lose the Person who brought me happiness..
Just because i was 14 doesn't mean that i was a crazed hormone machine that was fucking everything that moved.
And it annoys me that u think that I was that way.
Someone noticed my existence and was happy that i was alive.
no.. Your wrong i was innocent.
Other people weather it was older or younger then me, they were cruel to me.
living with the cruel words of others being wispered around you is terrible..
But then ..Someone had finally looked at me.. Remembered my name ....said that they loved me...
An for once i was happy.
Of course i didnt want to let that go, no matter what anyone said about it i was determined not to lose the Person who brought me happiness..
Just because i was 14 doesn't mean that i was a crazed hormone machine that was fucking everything that moved.
And it annoys me that u think that I was that way.
Someone noticed my existence and was happy that i was alive.
Published 11th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2017 5:19am
Wow that is so good wow
15th Jan 2017 9:54pm
6th Jun 2019 8:13pm
Great prose / self reflection piece if it was about yourself. well penned.
2nd to last stanza was great
"Of course i didnt want to let that go, no matter what anyone said about it i was determined not to lose the Person who brought me happiness..
Just because i was 14 doesn't mean that i was a crazed hormone machine that was fucking everything that moved.
And it annoys me that u think that I was that way. "
keep'em coming.
2nd to last stanza was great
"Of course i didnt want to let that go, no matter what anyone said about it i was determined not to lose the Person who brought me happiness..
Just because i was 14 doesn't mean that i was a crazed hormone machine that was fucking everything that moved.
And it annoys me that u think that I was that way. "
keep'em coming.
