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On the brink
fugitive from sanity slipping closers to the edge of unbridled madness
As the hours tick away ..the clock fading in to the mist
Rationality only seems like a fairytale treading the line of fictional mortality
Falling faster into this deep Bleek vastness
Just a simple victim of delirium only barely do I exist
Further I become on the brink of this grim life breaking from all the brutality
The seconds pluck away as I penetrate lunacy
Bleeding out reality sinking hastily to derangement
Absent expressions as the rip in my mentality leaves me paralyzed
Regurgitating this holocostic mutiny
Forcing this mental disengagement
Giving in to this eternal anguish...drifting off the edge hitting the pavement below immobilized
As the hours tick away ..the clock fading in to the mist
Rationality only seems like a fairytale treading the line of fictional mortality
Falling faster into this deep Bleek vastness
Just a simple victim of delirium only barely do I exist
Further I become on the brink of this grim life breaking from all the brutality
The seconds pluck away as I penetrate lunacy
Bleeding out reality sinking hastily to derangement
Absent expressions as the rip in my mentality leaves me paralyzed
Regurgitating this holocostic mutiny
Forcing this mental disengagement
Giving in to this eternal anguish...drifting off the edge hitting the pavement below immobilized
Published 10th Jan 2017
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10th Jan 2017 10:02pm
Wow! reading this I feel invaded - like somebody stole my innermost thoughts and feeling and etched them onto a page - this my friend is something else, something awesome - I hope there is more to come :-)
11th Jan 2017 00:30am
Thank you so much David I appreciate the comments and yes I have tons more to post
11th Jan 2017 00:33am
13th Jan 2017 1:57am
Good lines in this, I like, ' rationality only seems like a fairytale treading the line of fictional mortality '..
