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Déshabillé
Déshabillé
A summer night of sultry dreams,
I stand upon my balcony
From bedroom sanctuary mine,
To slip out of my négligée
I feel the need to shower clean,
To arch, to stretch, & know I'm seen.
Your eyes are flowing down my curves
As I turn slowly 'round to show
My breasts to full advantagement
That cup within my hands like wine,
Their swollen spigots shadows cast
Invite, imbibe, intoxicate.
Then let surround your flesh with mine
To lean, to bow, to rivulate
And mix elixir mine with yours!
The title is French for négligé, which is French for "neglected".
Published 9th Jan 2017
| Edited 22nd Jul 2018
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9th Jan 2017 3:32pm
a balcony, perhaps in Verona,
& eyes with an auspicious view...
from somewhere...
& eyes with an auspicious view...
from somewhere...
9th Jan 2017 9:32pm
Always a pleasure Jade! I was feeling like a voyeur until the invite. Just watching doesn't cut it. Excellent work, as always. Enleve tes vetements ma chere!
9th Jan 2017 9:47pm
Jade, this is a delicious passage: "Their swollen spigots shadows cast " Brava!
10th Jan 2017 00:16am
10th Jan 2017 1:29pm
Brava! Brava! indeed! Excellent write... sensuously intoxicating!
Love it!
tommy
Love it!
tommy
10th Jan 2017 1:41pm
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4th Apr 2017 4:42am
This surely is an exciting piece! a bit too much excitement, rather than love though, I felt.
24th Aug 2018 11:01pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
24th Aug 2018 10:54pm
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24th Aug 2018 11:03pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
24th Aug 2018 11:04pm
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24th Aug 2018 11:20pm
Oh dear dear... you don’t have me on your Followed Poets...
Comment expliquez-vous cette omission s'il vous plaît?
Comment expliquez-vous cette omission s'il vous plaît?
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
24th Aug 2018 11:21pm
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24th Aug 2018 11:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
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