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in the end you're on your own...
felt like I was dying
not that I know what dying actually
feels like
but anyway I felt rough
and I didn't know who I should
ring
so I rang you
but then you
couldn't think of anyone
either...
Published 9th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2017 1:49am
Death is quite a lonely experience I would have thought. I would say it is peaceful but how would I know?
9th Jan 2017 10:45pm
9th Jan 2017 2:19pm
LOL!!!!
They say humor can save a person. I read once where someone who was very sick locked themselves up for 48 hours with comedy. They literally laughed all weekend and came out feeling better than ever.
Something tells me your poetry could do the same.
They say humor can save a person. I read once where someone who was very sick locked themselves up for 48 hours with comedy. They literally laughed all weekend and came out feeling better than ever.
Something tells me your poetry could do the same.
9th Jan 2017 10:48pm
personally, I don't treat art
as therapy,
although maybe I'd be better
if I did... :)
as therapy,
although maybe I'd be better
if I did... :)
( s m i l e s......)
might as well leave them laughing....as you go--( your wonderfully wry wit will definitely be part of your legacy, to be sure!! But Paul, mo Chara......just PLEASE DON'T be in any hurry to test this out....Kk?? <3)
( Guess the Grimm Reaper must have a private listing???????) :p
might as well leave them laughing....as you go--( your wonderfully wry wit will definitely be part of your legacy, to be sure!! But Paul, mo Chara......just PLEASE DON'T be in any hurry to test this out....Kk?? <3)
( Guess the Grimm Reaper must have a private listing???????) :p
9th Jan 2017 10:50pm
Anonymous
10th Jan 2017 2:21pm
Yep, that's a good line.! Ha.
10th Jan 2017 11:07pm
10th Jan 2017 8:19pm
I have my answering machine on 24 / 7 in case death comes calling. I was got slapped in the face when I came calling - apparently I was calling out another woman's name :-)
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