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To Dream...(revisited)
Sleep silently O' beauty
precious, rest your pretty head
swim in sweet dreams of serenity
whilst such surreality gets bred...
take a trip to wonderment
upon wishes heaven sent
to embed in a hopeful heart
n' now, awaken to realities
as sweet dreams do depart
you see the magic lies within
yet, the details are layered thin
but if only you believe they really do
these mystic dreams will truly, sweetly come true...
precious, rest your pretty head
swim in sweet dreams of serenity
whilst such surreality gets bred...
take a trip to wonderment
upon wishes heaven sent
to embed in a hopeful heart
n' now, awaken to realities
as sweet dreams do depart
you see the magic lies within
yet, the details are layered thin
but if only you believe they really do
these mystic dreams will truly, sweetly come true...
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 8th Jan 2017
| Edited 9th Jan 2017
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Re. To Dream...(revisited)
8th Jan 2017 11:30pm
A soft and beautiful piece.
What are we without our dreams to soothe us?
Perhaps, an artist without brush or pen....
What are we without our dreams to soothe us?
Perhaps, an artist without brush or pen....
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
8th Jan 2017 11:33pm
I agree... For we as writers it's like dreams are life sustaining... Thank you my friend, truly n always grateful :)
Re. To Dream...(revisited)
9th Jan 2017 1:29am
I keep reading this one and trying to think of what I want to say...but the words are lost behind the wonder. So I will list it, love it and slip silently away. Beautiful :)
Willow
Willow
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9th Jan 2017 1:32am
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10th Jan 2017 1:48am
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10th Jan 2017 2:41am
He did!? Wow wish I could've been there! lol thank you my sweetest heart... Grateful always :)
Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
12th Jan 2017 5:36am
My youngest son woke to tell me of his dream...you know, the usual kiddie run down...but it was the profound life message he then popped out with nearly brought me to tears. Short version: what you dream mumma becomes your truth, truth!
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10th Jan 2017 1:59am
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10th Jan 2017 3:18am
PD! My sweetie! lol... You know I'm never really sure anymore when you're gonna pop online, BUT I'm always overjoyed when you do! :) thank you my dear, truly n always :)
Re. To Dream...(revisited)
10th Jan 2017 2:55am
Beautiful write my love. I got stuck here...
"you see the magic lies within
yet, the details are layered thin"
I could not tell you why those words touched my heart, but I can tell you that I love this write. Amazing as always love. 💋
"you see the magic lies within
yet, the details are layered thin"
I could not tell you why those words touched my heart, but I can tell you that I love this write. Amazing as always love. 💋
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
10th Jan 2017 3:13am
Wow... Touchin your heart... Ok, THAT comment just touched mine... Big thanks my sweetness, appreciate you more than I can say. :)
Re. To Dream...(revisited)
10th Jan 2017 6:17am
The first lines drew me in immediately!
This has to be one of the most comforting poems I've read here...
Such a beautiful poem, dear!
P.S. I've read it a few times and I kept reading 'take a trip to wonderland' (lol)
This has to be one of the most comforting poems I've read here...
Such a beautiful poem, dear!
P.S. I've read it a few times and I kept reading 'take a trip to wonderland' (lol)
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
11th Jan 2017 1:03am
Yea those trips to wonderland
are 'wonder-full' lol thank you so much sweetheart, grateful always :)
are 'wonder-full' lol thank you so much sweetheart, grateful always :)
Re. To Dream...(revisited)
Anonymous
10th Jan 2017 5:03pm
lordi lord Poe
this is beautiful
it reads like a soft sigh
xo
this is beautiful
it reads like a soft sigh
xo
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
11th Jan 2017 1:09am
YOU are beautiful my sweet mami...thanking you much for always
supporting me... :)
supporting me... :)
Re. To Dream...(revisited)
11th Jan 2017 2:39am
This is lovely, and dreamily wispy; my favorite lines are...
take a trip to wonderment
upon wishes heaven sent
to embed in a hopeful heart.
Just... gorgeous ! 🌞😎🌻🎈
take a trip to wonderment
upon wishes heaven sent
to embed in a hopeful heart.
Just... gorgeous ! 🌞😎🌻🎈
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
11th Jan 2017 2:47am
Wow the beauty came by for a visit! I'm deeply flattered n thank you kindly :)
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2017 7:03pm
impressive writing underlined by assurance. i'm impressed.
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
11th Jan 2017 7:14pm
Aaawww... I just try to express my heart n soul n if it's enjoyed then I'm happy :) thank you my dear lady :)
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2017 9:09pm
You're welcome, however, i'm a man. lol
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11th Jan 2017 11:09pm
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11th Jan 2017 9:49pm
My mind thinks of George Harrison's song, "If You Believe", looking at this write. Appreciate the positive hue.
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
11th Jan 2017 11:19pm
That's one song I'm not familiar with
so I guess I will have to check it out... Anywho, thanks a lot bro. Much appreciate your time n thoughts as always :)
so I guess I will have to check it out... Anywho, thanks a lot bro. Much appreciate your time n thoughts as always :)
Re. To Dream...(revisited)
12th Jan 2017 4:03am
You know what I love about you Rich? You can write about anything and have me fascinated with your pen.
This ink calmed me! Love the softness....
This ink calmed me! Love the softness....
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Re: Re. To Dream...(revisited)
12th Jan 2017 8:53am
Aaaawww... I'm happy it calmed you
sweet Rain, n I'm flattered so thanking you seems so lil but it does come from my heart... :)
sweet Rain, n I'm flattered so thanking you seems so lil but it does come from my heart... :)