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Reign of Forbearance
As the rain pours,
My reign soars
Under the clouds of gloom
Dim doom
Lunar moons,
Sailing smooth,
Into black holes
Of the universes womb....
I'll patiently wait
to stumble upon destiny..
Not be so naive in my future days
Less provocative in my lyrical slays
To avoid feeling used after the mood
has dimmed from erotic games and lust filled ways
Went searching for something missing
Only to realize it was myself
Came to release....
And more insight I was dealt...
Writers block has been unlocked
Inspiration has been sought
The journey to this underground realm,
Served more self discovery than one could have thought,
A self realization well
Yet...it's a tit for tat
As I traded block for lusts and laughs
Now the writing is the aftermath
As my energy settles from the
excitement of unexpected snags
Gotta straighten out my neck from breaking it on poetic swag,
Get my mind right,
Focus on long term sights
Raise my heartbeats to queens,
Write and dream
And later down my path,
I will focus on my life's mysteries
I have a beast within me
She feeds off lyrical wisdom
She weakens off seductive intelligence
Music and poetry are her only kriptonic defense
Her beginning
Her entirety
Her desinence
Published 8th Jan 2017
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8th Jan 2017 4:47am
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8th Jan 2017 5:06pm
8th Jan 2017 4:52am
"Went searching for something missing
Only to realize it was myself"
These words right here are the key to it all, I think. I look forward to seeing your journey unfold. I suspect it will take you to beautiful places. :)
Willow
Only to realize it was myself"
These words right here are the key to it all, I think. I look forward to seeing your journey unfold. I suspect it will take you to beautiful places. :)
Willow
8th Jan 2017 5:07pm
I suspect your suspicions are right Willow. I am excited for my journey of self discovery and see what it unfolds. :-)
8th Jan 2017 9:06am
Adore this poem LA, love the dark undertones bleeding throughout.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
8th Jan 2017 5:08pm
Thank you luv! I appreciate your reads and notes of my sullun feelings in the moment. :-)
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8th Jan 2017 11:47am
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8th Jan 2017 5:09pm
Thank you Adam! With you and willow being so kindred in mind and spirit, it is warming and not surprising thebsamw line is what drew you both in. Beautiful.
8th Jan 2017 3:41pm
8th Jan 2017 5:10pm
Thank you Crim! That is an honor coming from such a strong lyrical guidance as yourself.
8th Jan 2017 4:04pm
Deep write of further self- realization,
You are aware of what you lights your flame, of the major attractions that lurk you
So do you continue with the same means of attraction or do you choose to pier deeper into the vessels before you become swept away,
Almost as if your damned if you do or if you don’t…like you said doomed
Enjoyed this. Totally relatable
You are aware of what you lights your flame, of the major attractions that lurk you
So do you continue with the same means of attraction or do you choose to pier deeper into the vessels before you become swept away,
Almost as if your damned if you do or if you don’t…like you said doomed
Enjoyed this. Totally relatable
8th Jan 2017 5:14pm
Thank you. I'm glad you could relate. Yes I have to make the choice to Change perceptions or strengthen my weaknesses. Both a journey that will be rocky and possible doom filled moments. Part of the excitement in life I presume. I can only tell wth time. Thanks for reading.
10th Jan 2017 6:46am
How to comment on a piece like this?
I think a lot of people can relate to this one, I do!
"The journey to this underground realm,
Served more self discovery than one could have thought" > not sure if you refer to this site, but I think everyone here is both a student and a teacher! Your words truly enrich this place!
I think a lot of people can relate to this one, I do!
"The journey to this underground realm,
Served more self discovery than one could have thought" > not sure if you refer to this site, but I think everyone here is both a student and a teacher! Your words truly enrich this place!
10th Jan 2017 10:23am
