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Angel's Tears
crying in the midst of silence
I hear many other tears
as the tin roof sings mercy
laying there still and quiet
to not disturb the sound
intently listen to heavens song
often wonder if raindrops
are tears from Angel's
when our souls hurt so deeply
(Inspiration ~ a comment ~ thank you Willow)
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
I hear many other tears
as the tin roof sings mercy
laying there still and quiet
to not disturb the sound
intently listen to heavens song
often wonder if raindrops
are tears from Angel's
when our souls hurt so deeply
(Inspiration ~ a comment ~ thank you Willow)
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Angel's Tears
Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 2:48am
there are answers in silence.
nice writing flowergirl.
nice writing flowergirl.
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
8th Jan 2017 2:52am
Thank you Mo......I'm touched by your thoughts.......that's where most of my answers have been......in silence......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
8th Jan 2017 3:20am
I wish for all good things to come to you and stop the pain you seem to be suffering through. Sorry to find out about this.
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 4:16am
Awe Jerry....you're such a sensitve soul.......thank you my friend......as an empath heart I feel so much within.....but with friends like you......I always smile again.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 3:27am
Beautiful Sun Kissed....this is an interesting thought....it would be comforting to think so and such "tears" help to wash away the pain....With love - Sweet S xo :)
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 4:21am
Hey Sweet S......I'm not sure that it's just a thought.....so many times I've been sad......tears have fallen.......then heavens luv has rained down upon my soul......such comfort in the rain......sunshine.....even thunder.......thank you for sending me your thoughts......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
8th Jan 2017 3:46am
I will never hear rain on a tin roof the same again. So much more beautiful with your words. Thank you for sharing this, it's beyond lovely. ☺
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 4:25am
Awe Willow.......I'm so grateful for your inspirational words.......thank you.......I'm so thrilled you like this......I'm glad I could ink something to touch your soul.....honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
8th Jan 2017 3:55am
Re: Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 4:27am
Oh EW......I'm so honored to see your smile upon my ink......I'm glad you enjoyed......thank you for your sweet words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
8th Jan 2017 8:49am
Re: Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 4:29am
Hey E......thank you so very much for smiling upon my page.......glad you like this.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
8th Jan 2017 10:12am
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9th Jan 2017 4:30am
Hey Poet......thank you for such a gentle comment......beautiful vision.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
8th Jan 2017 6:19pm
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9th Jan 2017 4:35am
Hey Black....always a thrill to see your smile......thank you for the precious thoughts......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 4:35am
you excel in silence
silent imagery
tears fall slowly
hope they ere not
purple
only
silent imagery
tears fall slowly
hope they ere not
purple
only
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 4:38am
Hey Again.....they are happy tears now......so no worries......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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9th Jan 2017 4:33pm
Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 10:11pm
I love your theory about the rain, Flower. Angels might not be able to intervene, but I'm sure they do cry. Maybe sunshine could be their joy. Wonderful work!
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
10th Jan 2017 3:40am
Hey Crow......thank you for a thought provoking comment........perhaps some of their tears aren't sad ones......I like that the warmth of the "sun is their joy".....appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
9th Jan 2017 10:23pm
can you advise sis...
how to attach a picture to my poetry
i have some interesting ones
how to attach a picture to my poetry
i have some interesting ones
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
10th Jan 2017 3:50am
Hey Bro......after posting your write.....click on "multimedia"......then on "choose".......select the file your pic is saved under.......click on the pic......then click on "upload"......."veiw" than "yes"....then "submit" and it should show on the top of your write.
Re: Re. Angel's Tears
10th Jan 2017 3:12pm
i found out
the snaps etc are for seasoned folks
not like me blokes
thanks though
the snaps etc are for seasoned folks
not like me blokes
thanks though
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10th Jan 2017 5:52am
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11th Jan 2017 1:39am
Hey X.......I'm so glad I got you thinking.......glad you enjoyed......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
10th Jan 2017 6:56am
Angel's tears... oh wow!
Such a lovely and elegant poem and at the same time profound!
Thank you for sharing, flowergirl
Love, Duende
Such a lovely and elegant poem and at the same time profound!
Thank you for sharing, flowergirl
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
11th Jan 2017 1:42am
Awe Duende.......thank you for beautiful words and smile you leave me.......I do appreciate you so much my friend......glad you enjoyed this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
10th Jan 2017 6:15pm
A truly beautiful song and a truly beautiful thought :-)
Living in Scotland, the angels cry a lot :-(
Living in Scotland, the angels cry a lot :-(
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
11th Jan 2017 2:11am
Hey David.......your words make me smile......so glad you enjoyed this......thank you much. Btw.....I've been to Scotland.......it's very beautiful there.......the landscape is breathtaking......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Angel's Tears
11th Jan 2017 3:50am
LET ME KNOW OF YOUR BEST POEM WITH MOST COMMENTS I WILL ON THEM COMPOSE A POEM IT MUST COME ON UT RL STANDARDS
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13th Jan 2017 4:47am
Re. Angel's Tears
11th Jan 2017 8:24pm
"often wonder if raindrops
are tears from Angel's
when our souls hurt so deeply"
Nice write.
are tears from Angel's
when our souls hurt so deeply"
Nice write.
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Re: Re. Angel's Tears
13th Jan 2017 4:49am
Hey Ossy......always a pleasure to see your smile upon my ink......good to see you again......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)