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Brushing It Away
.
Felt the sun
morning rays
The warning touch
of your hand
Choices
Before my brushing it away
statement
given notice of want
Acknowledgement heard
In allowing yourself to be taken.
Felt the sun
morning rays
The warning touch
of your hand
Choices
Before my brushing it away
statement
given notice of want
Acknowledgement heard
In allowing yourself to be taken.
Published 6th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 7:54pm
Oh this was so interesting Rose....I read this about six times....and then it fell into place for me...yes, at times it takes me a bit...but in the end, as always...loved! Yes...loved indeed...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
7th Jan 2017 8:37pm
Took me about 4 reads too and I wrote it!!
Your not alone there lol
RL add too you sweet thing why thankyou Taryn
Your not alone there lol
RL add too you sweet thing why thankyou Taryn
