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Ultimate Luv
sitting in darkness of the night
not a sound to be heard
stillness all around me
stars not blinking in a black sky
clouds hiding moons light
gentle soft warm breeze swirls
I close my eyes and think of you
mediate on how your luv moves me
breathing you deep within
can feel the warmness of you
as each breath is deeper
my mind fills with luving thoughts
amazing how just thinking of you
brings your touch upon my skin
tender kisses across waiting lips
my meditation is broken suddenly
by a bursting thump of my heart
it's then my thoughts reveal
we've created the "ultimate luv"
(Inspired by a comment ~ thank you Crow)
not a sound to be heard
stillness all around me
stars not blinking in a black sky
clouds hiding moons light
gentle soft warm breeze swirls
I close my eyes and think of you
mediate on how your luv moves me
breathing you deep within
can feel the warmness of you
as each breath is deeper
my mind fills with luving thoughts
amazing how just thinking of you
brings your touch upon my skin
tender kisses across waiting lips
my meditation is broken suddenly
by a bursting thump of my heart
it's then my thoughts reveal
we've created the "ultimate luv"
(Inspired by a comment ~ thank you Crow)
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
6th Jan 2017 3:15am
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6th Jan 2017 3:24am
Awe Lily......they're shinning brightly and ever so happily as well......thank you my precious Sister.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Jan 2017 3:18am
I love how descriptive this was. Beautiful and captivating at the same time. Thanks for a great read:)
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6th Jan 2017 3:26am
Welcome to DU Eclipse! Thank you for smiling upon my ink......happy for the visit.......honored this ink captivated you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ultimate Luv
6th Jan 2017 3:52am
I will not envy you for your beautiful love. You deserve it. Your loving landscapes always bring me hope. ☺
Willow
Willow
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6th Jan 2017 4:02am
Awe Willow......you're words are precious.......thank you for your blessings.......a soul beautiful as you inside and out.....needs to never give up hope......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2017 7:16am
Miss Flower.
Miss Flower.
This brings a long and lengthy *sigh* to my heart.
Everything ultimate is what my future awaits.
You captured it brilliantly.
Thank You!
~love to you in purple hugs, Devlin.
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7th Jan 2017 8:53pm
Awe Sweet Dev.......if an "ultimate luv" awaits you int your future I'm more than happy for you.......a precious soul as yours deserves happiness........thank you for the honor of the RL add on......purple luv & hugs always your way xo :)
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6th Jan 2017 12:38pm
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8th Jan 2017 1:47am
Hey Adam......thank you for taking time to read this one......always a pleasure to see your smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ultimate Luv
Everyone else has said all the nice things about this beautiful poem, flower, so here is my two cents worth. You have such a wonderful outlook on life and love (luv) and it shines brightly from within. This is an exquisite, lovely piece of yourself and deep love.
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Awe Jerry......deeply touched by your words.......my outlook in life comes from the experiences of life itself.......thank you for your honorable words you've left me.....honored by the RL add on.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Ultimate Luv
6th Jan 2017 4:47pm
you go away
for a day
to search in the wilderness
then return to compose
a lovely three liners
for all
to in luv succumb
with a beautiful
snap and amazing poem
well done
for a day
to search in the wilderness
then return to compose
a lovely three liners
for all
to in luv succumb
with a beautiful
snap and amazing poem
well done
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8th Jan 2017 2:07am
Hey Again.....yes I disappear once in a while......to rest the heart and soul......thank you for your wonderful praise.......im smiling......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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8th Jan 2017 3:35pm
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9th Jan 2017 3:59am
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17th Aug 2017 7:18pm
whilst clearing all old junk i came across one reply from a lady purple i dared to say publish your books and you smiled silently and said you were an author already well since jan till now plenty of water has fallen down the Niagara falls do tell me frankly does my poetry matter at all mostly sexy and may not be printable softy ones none/few minuscule read do advise please I too want to publish
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Re. Ultimate Luv
6th Jan 2017 6:28pm
you're beautiful poetry transcends the words you use, yet without the words there would just be purpleness. :-)
this is simply beautiful - you are so good at this :-)
this is simply beautiful - you are so good at this :-)
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8th Jan 2017 2:10am
Awe David......your tears with my smile.......I'm so happy.......your words just gave my heart a much needed lift......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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7th Jan 2017 5:03pm
Your beautiful soul resonates in this piece!
Such an enchanting, smile-inducing, heartwarming write :-)
Love, Duende
Such an enchanting, smile-inducing, heartwarming write :-)
Love, Duende
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8th Jan 2017 2:18am
Awe Duende......thank you my friend.......your touching words bring warmth to my page.......btw......your smile is beautiful.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 10:13pm
i like it for its romantic feel. lovers effect us in so many ways.
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8th Jan 2017 2:24am
Hey Mo......I can tell by your writes you're a romantic.......you're so right.....luvers do effect us.....in most things we do or feel......sacred having one that truly shows you luv......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 3:16am
It's a beautiful place where the mind and heart can take us Beautiful Sun Kissed and you capture it lovely here, as always...I just loved this line...
"tender kisses across waiting lips"
~ just lovely
With love - Sweet S xo :)
"tender kisses across waiting lips"
~ just lovely
With love - Sweet S xo :)
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9th Jan 2017 4:04am
Hey Sweet S.....you know I have the best of inspirations when it comes to feeling luv.......I'm so very fortunate......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)