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Re. bridged
4th Jan 2017 10:35pm
I'm sharing this on my facebook. We should be facebook friends btw... :) PM me your name if you'd like...
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Re. bridged
4th Jan 2017 10:41pm
Ahhh . . . Love this simple but oh so effective piece of poetical writing, Ahavati. Brilliant I would venture to say.
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Re. bridged
but would a bridge between
presence and absence actually
lead anywhere...
and maybe that's one river
I don't want to cross just yet...
styx in my throat, a little. :)
great poem
and a rather lovely picture
of a bridge... :)
presence and absence actually
lead anywhere...
and maybe that's one river
I don't want to cross just yet...
styx in my throat, a little. :)
great poem
and a rather lovely picture
of a bridge... :)
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Re. bridged
Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 11:54pm
This is stunning...I stopped to pause on this one...deep pause...that alone I thank you for with this asberger brain of mine...but for the message even more...Thank you again!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re. bridged
4th Jan 2017 11:54pm
I find this piece very moving and touching. Genius...I adore it :) Thanks so much for sharing
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5th Jan 2017 00:03am
Re. bridged
5th Jan 2017 3:03am
I find this beautifully relevant, personally... it can get pretty cold out there. Thanks for another warm verse. :)
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Re. bridged
5th Jan 2017 3:04am
I had never before considered that temporary things are bridges. You've given me a new perspective that will warm my days for many years, I think. I read this several times and each time it sunk in deeper. I will be reading it again, I'm sure. Thank you, Ahavati, for sharing these amazing insights :)
Willow
Willow
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Re. bridged
5th Jan 2017 7:23am
I'll have to agree with, Willow on this one. Your unique perspectives truly give us
a moment to take pause and rethink our own. So very beautiful and profound...
a moment to take pause and rethink our own. So very beautiful and profound...
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Re. bridged
5th Jan 2017 9:20pm
That's the first time I think I read a poem superimposed over an image. Was curious what it would look like. Beautiful sentiment. I hope you are right and blessed many times over.
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Re. bridged
8th Jan 2017 7:07pm
So beautiful, so fufilling and sense I cannot
comment on the other. O'my yes, what an
hydration for a soul like mine.
Merci my dearest love, 100 fold.
As soon as my list get well again, lol. ;)
-Howlings
comment on the other. O'my yes, what an
hydration for a soul like mine.
Merci my dearest love, 100 fold.
As soon as my list get well again, lol. ;)
-Howlings
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