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A Tormented Love
One more night
you beg from me
One more night
I can still hear your plea
As I fuck you harder
my lust grows stronger
As the tension increases
My heart grows fonder
But this pain inside me
has never subsided
From that fateful day
You and I remain forever divided
The shadow of doubt
has been cast
Forever we remain
entrapped by the past
As time passes by
our love still in pieces
You say that you need me
You want a love that never ceases
This love that we have
as real as it may be
Is one forever lost
like a leaf from it’s tree
you beg from me
One more night
I can still hear your plea
As I fuck you harder
my lust grows stronger
As the tension increases
My heart grows fonder
But this pain inside me
has never subsided
From that fateful day
You and I remain forever divided
The shadow of doubt
has been cast
Forever we remain
entrapped by the past
As time passes by
our love still in pieces
You say that you need me
You want a love that never ceases
This love that we have
as real as it may be
Is one forever lost
like a leaf from it’s tree
Published 4th Jan 2017
| Edited 6th Jan 2017
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4th Jan 2017 8:55am
I love how real this is. Very refreshing to read some real poetry around here ^^
Greatness
Greatness
4th Jan 2017 9:38am
4th Jan 2017 9:49am
The pain here...is very real as well as your frustration. And raw. I like this very much :)
4th Jan 2017 10:05am
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4th Jan 2017 8:40pm
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5th Jan 2017 7:55pm
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5th Jan 2017 8:52pm
6th Jan 2017 6:49pm
beautiful poem in general, though the last stanza was perfection :-)
nice write :-)
nice write :-)
6th Jan 2017 7:36pm
6th Jan 2017 7:42pm
There are times when something breaks and it can't be put back together, or at least returned to a past state. Compelling write.
7th Jan 2017 3:27am
7th Jan 2017 6:32am
I love this peice, it really touched my soul upon reading this beautiful poem!
8th Jan 2017 9:29am
14th Jan 2017 7:52am
I have a poem on my computer titled "One More Night" but I'm not able to write it...
This is like reading my life and my last (lost) love...
Your words are truly deeply moving, consider me a fan!
This is like reading my life and my last (lost) love...
Your words are truly deeply moving, consider me a fan!
I'll be anxiously awaiting the day I get to read that poem of yours! I totally relate to that, I have many blank poems on my laptop that I know what Id like to write about and I have plenty emotion for it but the time just isn't right to pen it down. Don't worry though, one day the words will just start flowing:) Thanks for reading!
8th Feb 2018 9:03am
The epitome of my name, she cares too much, he's long given up. A match made in misery, even in our loveless ways we still bring someone in because we can't have sex with our demons, we just give them a better relationship.
9th Feb 2018 9:56pm
