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Escape from a Doubter's Prison
Its presence fills a void in my heart
As dawn breaks I’m right back to the start
A night filled of peace, awareness, and love
And yet it takes flight as if it's a dove
It questions reality as so it may seem
Makes me ponder if life's only a dream
An experience that one must only have once
Can linger in the heart for many more months
As dawn breaks I’m right back to the start
A night filled of peace, awareness, and love
And yet it takes flight as if it's a dove
It questions reality as so it may seem
Makes me ponder if life's only a dream
An experience that one must only have once
Can linger in the heart for many more months
Published 3rd Jan 2017
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2017 12:25pm
Deep expression, with potent imagery.
Well done 💓
Well done 💓
3rd Jan 2017 8:35pm
You are so kind! Thank you very much <3 ( I can't find the red heart emoji lol)
Why the title? Once you've seen the illusion, can you really escape?
Also, welcome to DU
Also, welcome to DU
3rd Jan 2017 8:41pm
I chose this particular title more so to evoke thought than anything. I think while high it can feel as if its a temporary "escape". In terms of your "can you really escape?" question, thats for you to decide;) Thanks for your feedback! Greatly appreciated.
7th Jan 2017 8:11am
That is such an interesting poem, how were you inspired? Its seems like u put alot of thought into
