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Dancing Shadow
listening to pouring rain
dancing upon the tin roof
tapping a sweet song
watching a candles flame
flickering in darkness
reflecting upon my skin
smile reflects off glass
when I look into my eyes
by flames intimate light
movement of my shadow
swaying upon on the wall
dance in the rain by candle light
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
dancing upon the tin roof
tapping a sweet song
watching a candles flame
flickering in darkness
reflecting upon my skin
smile reflects off glass
when I look into my eyes
by flames intimate light
movement of my shadow
swaying upon on the wall
dance in the rain by candle light
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Dancing Shadow
A poem delved from the heart, giving so much feeling within its expressions. love this poignant expression of nature's moment in time! Photo is fantastic.
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3rd Jan 2017 4:04am
Hey Jerry......thank you for blessing me with your words.......I'm glad you enjoyed this.......nature is such a strong inspiration to me.....specially rain.......glad you like the pic......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jan 2017 3:59am
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3rd Jan 2017 4:28am
Hey Daniel.......thank you for smiling upon my ink......glad you enjoyed this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jan 2017 5:04am
Hey Devine......thank you for gracing my page with your smile......thrilled you liked this......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jan 2017 5:00am
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3rd Jan 2017 5:07am
HI Devine....thank you for another smile.......I'm glad my words brought her to life......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
3rd Jan 2017 5:39am
Hypnotizing imagery G! How do you keep up with the beat when dancing to the beat of pouring rain on a tin roof? Gotta have happy feet!
JJ
JJ
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6th Jan 2017 3:39am
Hey JJ.......glad you enjoyed this one......um.....how bout I let you know on that.....LOL!! I'm sure it's having more than happy feet though......just guessing......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jan 2017 8:14am
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6th Jan 2017 3:41am
Hey Peot......yes it did......mmmmm......bring a candle......had a long night......mine are all burnt out......LOL!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
3rd Jan 2017 11:22am
There is something magical about dancing in the rain :-)
Such a sweet and tender write, dear flowergirl!
Such a sweet and tender write, dear flowergirl!
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6th Jan 2017 3:42am
Hey Duende......you're right.....there is magic dancing in the rain......just listening to the tapping is magical.......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2017 12:27pm
I love the energy of this write.
Your pic truly brings it all to life.
Truly love ink, Sweet Flower 💜
Your pic truly brings it all to life.
Truly love ink, Sweet Flower 💜
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6th Jan 2017 4:04am
Hey Heart.......thank you for your energetic words........happy you got into the dance......always smile seeing your visit....purple luv luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jan 2017 1:51pm
FG..this is a cascade of beautiful imagery,,,
the feel of your words seems to quiet the
world about you..
the feel of your words seems to quiet the
world about you..
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6th Jan 2017 4:12am
Hey Naajir......beautiful thoughts and feelings you share with me......yes my world is very quiet at times......that's when simple inspirations touch me deep down......thank you....,purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
3rd Jan 2017 2:40pm
You've captured such beautiful and self-loving moments here. You had me completely enthralled at the mention of rain dancing on a tin roof. There's not another sound like it in the world. You've painted a gem here, my lady :)
Willow
Willow
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6th Jan 2017 4:22am
Awe Willow.......I have to agree with you.....that sound is so heavenly.......creates a beautiful song in a still silent night......thank you for your soothing words......honored by the RL add on.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
3rd Jan 2017 3:37pm
its high time your poetry books danced
no not in the rain
but in libraries
just go to a publisher and see
your poetry is wonderfully...
full of exotic glee
purply
title the poety book as
'' Waves of Purple ''
no not in the rain
but in libraries
just go to a publisher and see
your poetry is wonderfully...
full of exotic glee
purply
title the poety book as
'' Waves of Purple ''
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6th Jan 2017 4:50am
Hey Again......what wonderful praise you bring.......I have made scrap books of my poetry......also am a published author. It am planning on doing a book with just me......thank you for your kind encouragement......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Jan 2017 4:51pm
the three liner
copy writer
has to be an author
what name of poetry books and author???
we'd luv to c
do permit me
purple sis
poet ye
copy writer
has to be an author
what name of poetry books and author???
we'd luv to c
do permit me
purple sis
poet ye
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7th Jan 2017 3:41am
Hey Peotic Brother.......the book is written with two others authors......you can find it on lulu.com or Amazon......it is called ~ "Hearts Of Three Poets" (Charles Allen)......it's the book with 3 purple roses on the cover.......they are older writes that I'm not sure are published here any more.......I have books with me if you would like an autographed one let me know and I will send it to you......thank you :)
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3rd Jan 2017 9:30pm
There is nothing like rain on a tin roof nor shadows by candlelight. Something so mystical about their movement in space to the sound of rain.
Lovely, Purple One.
Lovely, Purple One.
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7th Jan 2017 3:43am
Oh Ahavati.....you're so right.....such a beautiful sound it is.......when I was little it would calm me and put me to sleep.......thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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7th Jan 2017 3:48am
Hey OS.....thank you for your pleasant visit........glad you enjoyed.....honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
4th Jan 2017 9:21am
Your writings are always never short of beautiful everytime, inspirational yes and a twist of sensual imagery but sooo individual. For the last 6 - 7 years of reading you and collaborating with you there is an originality of your chosen words no matter how dark, sexy, romantic your purple theme is. And when I think of writing whatever it may be, it's you and a few others I think about which unfortunately some have left here. PEACE!!!
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Awe "JW"........ive never forgotten you my friend.......I was reading my old writes the other day and ran across some of ours......it brought back some touching memories......thank you for your heart caressing words.......I'm very honored by the RL add on ........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Jan 2017 6:32pm
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7th Jan 2017 3:58am
Hey 23.......I'm always touched to see your smile upon my page.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Jan 2017 7:28pm
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7th Jan 2017 4:00am
Hey Adara.......I'm thrilled you enjoyed this......thank you for taking time to visit me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Jan 2017 10:30pm
This is quietly beautiful, with flickers, reflections and intimate flames. That does not, however, keep you from dancing. Brava Flower!
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7th Jan 2017 4:04am
Hey Crow.......you're words always bless me.......thank you for such a sensual response.......specially for the "BRAVA"......I'm truly honored......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
5th Jan 2017 4:13am
You always paint a picture so very fresh and sweet Flower. Always a fan girl. Thank you. 😌
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7th Jan 2017 4:06am
Hey Twitch........thank you.......always a pleasure seeing you upon my ink.......honored by the fan club......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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5th Jan 2017 7:47pm
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7th Jan 2017 8:48pm
Hey X.......always a thrill to see you.......I'm happy you enjoyed this read.......thank you for taking time to visit my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
6th Jan 2017 7:04pm
beautiful descriptive imagery coupled with passion and excitement - this one really raised my spirits :-)
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7th Jan 2017 8:50pm
Awe David........you're such a sweet soul.......I'm glad touched you......it was awesome to write.......thank you for lifting my spirits......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dancing Shadow
''Mini Steps on a Rainy Tin Top'' ....BY ALL COMMENTATORSON MY .......
Writings are always
never short of beautiful
every time,
inspirational yes
and
a twist of sensual imagery
there is an originality of chosen words
no matter
how dark, sexy, romantic
your purple theme
Nothing like rain on a tin roof
nor shadows by candlelight.
mystical about their movement
in space
to the sound of rain.
Its high time your poetry books danced
no not in the rain
but in libraries
they pranced
Captured such beautiful
and
self-loving moments.
enthralled at the mention of rain
dancing on a tin roof.
There's not another sound
like it in the world.
painted a gem
a cascade of beautiful,
hypnotizing imagery
Love this poignant expression
of nature's moment in time!
Beautiful descriptive imagery
coupled with passion and excitement
Serene scene
paint a picture
so very fresh and sweet
quietly beautiful
with flickers, reflections
and
intimate flames.
imagery is so graceful.
Note
With presumed kind courtesy of poets
who commented upon my rainy poetry
PURPLE POET
Dear Poet Purple and Authoress
I dare to steal words of poets
who admire your poetry
I am not much of a poet all know...
Please be gracious enough to soft paint your brush
and seek their blessings
in this my
New Eras creative poetry
after modifying it ....
PURPLE ma'am
All the best ''IN ORDER TO AVOID PLAGIARISM
YOU CAN ALONE POST IT AFTER SEEKING THEIR PERMISSION
Writings are always
never short of beautiful
every time,
inspirational yes
and
a twist of sensual imagery
there is an originality of chosen words
no matter
how dark, sexy, romantic
your purple theme
Nothing like rain on a tin roof
nor shadows by candlelight.
mystical about their movement
in space
to the sound of rain.
Its high time your poetry books danced
no not in the rain
but in libraries
they pranced
Captured such beautiful
and
self-loving moments.
enthralled at the mention of rain
dancing on a tin roof.
There's not another sound
like it in the world.
painted a gem
a cascade of beautiful,
hypnotizing imagery
Love this poignant expression
of nature's moment in time!
Beautiful descriptive imagery
coupled with passion and excitement
Serene scene
paint a picture
so very fresh and sweet
quietly beautiful
with flickers, reflections
and
intimate flames.
imagery is so graceful.
Note
With presumed kind courtesy of poets
who commented upon my rainy poetry
PURPLE POET
Dear Poet Purple and Authoress
I dare to steal words of poets
who admire your poetry
I am not much of a poet all know...
Please be gracious enough to soft paint your brush
and seek their blessings
in this my
New Eras creative poetry
after modifying it ....
PURPLE ma'am
All the best ''IN ORDER TO AVOID PLAGIARISM
YOU CAN ALONE POST IT AFTER SEEKING THEIR PERMISSION
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16th Jan 2017 3:34am
Thank you Poetic Bro......this was very awesome......appreciate all the work you put into this......you're very talented and this shows it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Dancing Shadow
17th Jan 2017 5:47pm
well thanks
to avoid any scope of unwanted remarks
or comments
I am removing it
to avoid any scope of unwanted remarks
or comments
I am removing it
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19th Jan 2017 3:51pm