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Sailing To My Hunny
I sail across waters of luv
searching for my hunny
knowing upon a wave
he will be waving at me
guiding my sails to him
on golden sandy shores
where our eyes will meet
and lips quiver "Hello!"
days of bliss we shall share
upon an island of paradise
where nothing matters
but making luv and tanning
(Thank you Darkly for the pic)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
searching for my hunny
knowing upon a wave
he will be waving at me
guiding my sails to him
on golden sandy shores
where our eyes will meet
and lips quiver "Hello!"
days of bliss we shall share
upon an island of paradise
where nothing matters
but making luv and tanning
(Thank you Darkly for the pic)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 31st Dec 2016
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31st Dec 2016 5:02am
"Making love and tanning" > that made me giggle ;-)
Such a delicate and lovely write, dear flowergirl!
Love, Duende
Such a delicate and lovely write, dear flowergirl!
Love, Duende
31st Dec 2016 5:09am
Awe Duende.......I was hoping that line would bring a smile or giggle......thank you for your graceful words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
31st Dec 2016 7:07am
Beautiful Sun Kissed, my Dear Duende took words from me...such a light hearted peaceful flow to this and the little chuckle at the end....just please...be sure to bring sunscreen! Love to you....With love - Sweet S xo :)
1st Jan 2017 00:51am
Hey Sweet S........thank you for the smile upon my ink........I'm so glad this brought peace to you......thirlled it got you to "chuckle".......don't need sunscreen......there's shade under the palm trees.......so I've imagined......LOL!! Sending you luv & hugs xo :)
31st Dec 2016 1:47pm
where our eyes will meet
and lips quiver "Hello!"
It's that moment, isn't it? When time slows and everything drops into place...eyes meeting and lips quivering...you wrote it just write. As with Duende and Taryn, I also giggled with the luv and tanning. Beautiful words, beautiful emotions, lovely petal :)
Willow
and lips quiver "Hello!"
It's that moment, isn't it? When time slows and everything drops into place...eyes meeting and lips quivering...you wrote it just write. As with Duende and Taryn, I also giggled with the luv and tanning. Beautiful words, beautiful emotions, lovely petal :)
Willow
1st Jan 2017 1:05am
Awe Willow.......that moment in time that just touches the soul like no other moment.......one that we all wait a life time it seems to share with a once in a life time mate.......thank you for the touching response.......I'm a bit teary from your beautiful words.......I'm glad you giggled too.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
31st Dec 2016 2:07pm
So very beautiful, sweet Flower 💜
I love the delicate sweetness of this piece and the purity feel of expression.
Lovely ink. 💓
I love the delicate sweetness of this piece and the purity feel of expression.
Lovely ink. 💓
1st Jan 2017 1:07am
Awe Lovely Heart.......you always bring a smile to me with your peaceful words and thoughts........I'm thrilled you enjoyed this.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st Jan 2017 1:11am
Hey Jerry........alway looking for happiness......it's life going I think.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
31st Dec 2016 2:56pm
1st Jan 2017 1:17am
Hey Ahavati.......paradise is exactly how we imagine it to be......even more beautiful looking into the eyes of your soulmate.......thank you for your gracefulness upon my page as usual......purple luv & hugs xo :)
31st Dec 2016 8:54pm
1st Jan 2017 1:36am
Hey Soul......thank you for your wonderful thoughts and encouragement.......sending you smiles......luv & hugs your way xo :)
1st Jan 2017 11:08pm
I am dark
as black as soot
hoping the sun will burn me
into ashes
white
some day
one day
any day
as 2016 also passes away
HAPPY 2017 TO UUUUUUUUUUUUUU
as always
in the moonlight of creation
may you for ever stay
ur mind is blooming
purlpleeeeeeeeeee
as black as soot
hoping the sun will burn me
into ashes
white
some day
one day
any day
as 2016 also passes away
HAPPY 2017 TO UUUUUUUUUUUUUU
as always
in the moonlight of creation
may you for ever stay
ur mind is blooming
purlpleeeeeeeeeee
2nd Jan 2017 2:10am
Happy New Year Again! Thank you for your words you've left me......I hope many blessings come your way thru out the year......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Jan 2017 4:16am
6th Jan 2017 3:18am
Awe Twitch.......thank you for your graceful words......always an honor to see your smile upon my ink.....thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
