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A Lasso For The Moon
With wax from honeycomb
spread by my fingers
I molded this candle
to place in the window
Thee, thou & thy
sweeps the only rhyme my Dear
crush your velvet purse
to my cheek
O
Heaven held in heartbeat
how thro these ancient veins
course the youthful vigor
origin of wishing well
Wade with me my Love
let consume our tide and fallen sky
twine the fingers pear & cup
a world lost in lineage
with acquired lines
breadth to seasons through exhale
woven unique
fabric, lattice & underpin
insulate
this...
This to You
I could promise
spread by my fingers
I molded this candle
to place in the window
Thee, thou & thy
sweeps the only rhyme my Dear
crush your velvet purse
to my cheek
O
Heaven held in heartbeat
how thro these ancient veins
course the youthful vigor
origin of wishing well
Wade with me my Love
let consume our tide and fallen sky
twine the fingers pear & cup
a world lost in lineage
with acquired lines
breadth to seasons through exhale
woven unique
fabric, lattice & underpin
insulate
this...
This to You
I could promise
Published 31st Dec 2016
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31st Dec 2016 3:23am
What a beautiful weave of roped imagery entwined with the promise of hope.
That first stanza pulses with the regalia of ancient ritual.
That first stanza pulses with the regalia of ancient ritual.
31st Dec 2016 6:58pm
Hopes and Dreams AV. they are a driving force in life.
Thank You so much for the RL and feeling this little ditty :)
Thank You so much for the RL and feeling this little ditty :)
Anonymous
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31st Dec 2016 10:39am
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31st Dec 2016 7:01pm
Truly Dear Queen-It IS an Honour to make Your RL!!!
Your support is Always Greatly Appreciated!!!
Your support is Always Greatly Appreciated!!!
1st Jan 2017 11:54pm
I wish there was no limit to the favorite list. I could
read this repeatedly. What a pleasure Sir. Beautifully etched.
read this repeatedly. What a pleasure Sir. Beautifully etched.
2nd Jan 2017 00:02am
You Are so very kind HP- Appreciate You swinging by this neck o the woods.
hey just stick it out at ol DU ...eventually the reading list becomes endless to the amount you can acquire ( I forget the rules to that- but it's true)
hey just stick it out at ol DU ...eventually the reading list becomes endless to the amount you can acquire ( I forget the rules to that- but it's true)
2nd Jan 2017 00:58am
2nd Jan 2017 1:31am
And there's a comment I've longed to see. :)
My very first supporter!!!
Funny You mention them.
I had that lovely voice on my playlist today....when the day just needs to be a relaxing one- Ahhhhh
My very first supporter!!!
Funny You mention them.
I had that lovely voice on my playlist today....when the day just needs to be a relaxing one- Ahhhhh
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2017 5:32pm
Whoever is the muse in this poem, is most definitely cherished and loved.
Mister Soul you've spun silk with your words wrapping velvet dreams..and it most certainly deserves a special place in R's list ;)
Mister Soul you've spun silk with your words wrapping velvet dreams..and it most certainly deserves a special place in R's list ;)
2nd Jan 2017 5:56pm
O My Muse...She paints Beautifully...If only i could accurately capture these depths to word.
4th Jan 2017 6:32am
4th Jan 2017 1:54pm
20th Jan 2017 1:55am
Brilliant from first word to last, hopefulness dances sweet on my tongue - brought forth, as always, by a master poet at work!
20th Jan 2017 2:08am
You are very kind- Ever grateful for the RL !!! I'm glad you felt this-it's emotive depth is very central to me!!!
Anonymous
10th Feb 2017 5:16am
So very beautiful.
It had a Shakespearean feel to it, which is definitely swoon worthy.
Your words capture the heart, as the complete vision intertwines body & soul.
Amazing work.
It had a Shakespearean feel to it, which is definitely swoon worthy.
Your words capture the heart, as the complete vision intertwines body & soul.
Amazing work.
11th Feb 2017 4:44am
Again You Are too kind-TY so much!!! my heart- it is the only way I know to write- subject/tone vary...but most all carry my core :)
