deepundergroundpoetry.com
AFTER THE CLOUDBURST (PREQUEL TO 'ON THE BATHROOM FLOOR')
Drenched by sudden summer shower
When walking out at a late hour,
We darted back towards the house,
Me and my saturated spouse.
Back indoors, the weather shut out,
We could decently cast a clout.
"We are wet enough as it is...
Let's get down and do the biz,
GET YOUR KIT OFF!" my wife said.
Obligingly, I got naked.
She stepped towards me, more closely;
Soon her hands were all over me.
My manhood stirred, I helped her strip,
Into her core I took my dip.
Body on body, skin on skin,
We thrusted up-down, out and in,
Getting in added ways wetter.
After climax we felt better.
To follow on we shared a bath,
Facing each other from each half,
Our hands in hands and toes to toes,
We rested, then got back up close.
Desires rekindled came to fore;
We encored - On The Bathroom Floor.
When walking out at a late hour,
We darted back towards the house,
Me and my saturated spouse.
Back indoors, the weather shut out,
We could decently cast a clout.
"We are wet enough as it is...
Let's get down and do the biz,
GET YOUR KIT OFF!" my wife said.
Obligingly, I got naked.
She stepped towards me, more closely;
Soon her hands were all over me.
My manhood stirred, I helped her strip,
Into her core I took my dip.
Body on body, skin on skin,
We thrusted up-down, out and in,
Getting in added ways wetter.
After climax we felt better.
To follow on we shared a bath,
Facing each other from each half,
Our hands in hands and toes to toes,
We rested, then got back up close.
Desires rekindled came to fore;
We encored - On The Bathroom Floor.
Published 30th Dec 2016
| Edited 31st Dec 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 1
comments 2
reads 752
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
31st Dec 2016 2:26am
I liked it, but breaking it into stanzas might make it easier to read.
I do not find 22 lines easily divisible. Usually I divide long poems into chunks of verses of at least four lines each. Reading this again, I added 2 lines to make clear the stripping took place inside the house, and have been able to make this into four verses.
