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Scarlet hair
The girl with the Scarlet hair
She takes me there
Hand in hand in a circular motion
A place beyond your hope and deepest devotion
Could it be
A straight to the heart catastrophe
Or could it be, could it be
That thing hanging in your heart that speaks for your emotion
Could it be, one of many things
a love lost once recounted
Of so many things
The one that I want
The one who'll really know me
a reflection in the heart
Whoever she could be, whoever she could be
A motion in your soul,
That you never could never have known
she's that hand in place when I've got the shakes
I just hear a sound that makes it fit perfectly in a place
because I heard that I was still alive
She takes me there
Hand in hand in a circular motion
A place beyond your hope and deepest devotion
Could it be
A straight to the heart catastrophe
Or could it be, could it be
That thing hanging in your heart that speaks for your emotion
Could it be, one of many things
a love lost once recounted
Of so many things
The one that I want
The one who'll really know me
a reflection in the heart
Whoever she could be, whoever she could be
A motion in your soul,
That you never could never have known
she's that hand in place when I've got the shakes
I just hear a sound that makes it fit perfectly in a place
because I heard that I was still alive
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Re. Scarlet hair
28th Dec 2016 9:31pm
Perfect. Charlie Brown could not have said it better.
May the little red-headed girl afford you the same.
May the little red-headed girl afford you the same.
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Re. Scarlet hair
28th Dec 2016 9:37pm
Re. Scarlet hair
28th Dec 2016 10:01pm
She sounds very exciting you really made me feel your desire and passion for her with this write..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re. Scarlet hair
28th Dec 2016 10:06pm
Re. Scarlet hair
29th Dec 2016 1:17am
Re. Scarlet hair
29th Dec 2016 3:51pm
excellent direct approach to emotional attachment - your passion and desire are both clearly felt - so well written
super Ink :-)
super Ink :-)
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Re. Scarlet hair
29th Dec 2016 5:19pm
Re. Scarlet hair
1st Jan 2017 8:27pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9339/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9339/
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Re. Scarlet hair
13th Jan 2017 3:13pm
Smashing last line to an outstanding poem!
"Could it be" > and you got some more repetition... consider me a fan :-)
"Could it be" > and you got some more repetition... consider me a fan :-)
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Re. Scarlet hair
13th Jan 2017 3:15pm
Re. Scarlet hair
13th Jan 2017 7:18pm
Aaaawww, I gotta say the fact it was in the "love poems" category got me first, n that it was about a redhead... Yea, I HAD to read it lol... (Fucking love redheads! Lol)...
So yea, maybe a figment of ur imagination, but if I were you? I'd try n make it come true! :)
So yea, maybe a figment of ur imagination, but if I were you? I'd try n make it come true! :)
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Re. Scarlet hair
13th Jan 2017 7:22pm
Haha one can only hope it may come true, we share the same passion :) thank you for your comment and time, it's much appreciated :)