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Cry
Desperate quiet rings
In ears deaf to hope
My suffering circumvents
Acts of kindness
Extended by friendly hands
And settles in my lungs
That constrict
A claustrophobic unease builds
Circling into a cyclone scream
And howls up giving moon
My hinterland pain
My tears flow in rivers of remorse
For the hurt i wore as my shield
From love
As it snarled
Tossing me to bitterness
In ears deaf to hope
My suffering circumvents
Acts of kindness
Extended by friendly hands
And settles in my lungs
That constrict
A claustrophobic unease builds
Circling into a cyclone scream
And howls up giving moon
My hinterland pain
My tears flow in rivers of remorse
For the hurt i wore as my shield
From love
As it snarled
Tossing me to bitterness
Published 27th Dec 2016
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2016 2:31pm
'A claustrophobic unease builds' I really like this line it has strong imagery and deep emotion. I think of bleak walls and dim light crushing inward.
