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-I miss you
when I think of you
it's as if my thoughts
are trying to pull the tides
away from the Moon
because sometimes
it's not easy
to go with the flow
I often find myself
wondering what it would mean
to steal a piece your heart
but the truth is
I already know the answer
and I just miss you...
-ed
it's as if my thoughts
are trying to pull the tides
away from the Moon
because sometimes
it's not easy
to go with the flow
I often find myself
wondering what it would mean
to steal a piece your heart
but the truth is
I already know the answer
and I just miss you...
-ed
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 24th Dec 2016
| Edited 30th Oct 2020
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Re. -Danielle
24th Dec 2016 2:02pm
Re: Re. -Danielle
Thanks for noticing. I think I found a soulmate.
Appreciate the read and comments,
-ed
Appreciate the read and comments,
-ed
Re. -Danielle
25th Dec 2016 1:14am
Re: Re. -Danielle
26th Dec 2016 9:35pm
Re. -Danielle
26th Dec 2016 7:53am
Re: Re. -Danielle
26th Dec 2016 9:35pm
Re. -Danielle
26th Dec 2016 9:24pm
Re: Re. -Danielle
26th Dec 2016 9:37pm
I'm humbled by your kind word, my dear. She seemed to like the message as well, which has me thrilled. Thanks for stopping in I always enjoy your comments...
Re: Re. -Danielle
31st Dec 2016 7:28pm
Re. -Danielle
Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 3:00pm
such compelling verses, eddy... dunno how i managed to miss this slice of magic.
gorgeous gorgeous
gorgeous gorgeous
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Re: Re. -Danielle
7th Jan 2017 4:48pm
I sent it to you on whatsapp, silly... :)
Thanks for reading and commenting, love...
Thanks for reading and commenting, love...
Re: Re. -Danielle
Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 7:37pm
was i drunk?
nevermind, i was probably drunk.
nevermind, i was probably drunk.
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Re: Re. -Danielle
10th Jan 2017 3:41am
You're a young Russian girl with baggage... Of course you were drunk... ;)
Love and miss you...
Love and miss you...