Portrait of a resting man

this suits my darkened state of mind perfectly KDAmB..

thank you..

love Brenda

Welcome my dear Friend Brenda..
few things... you said it very correctly 'State' of mind.. absolute acknowledgement of the fact it is temporary and passing. I don't know what to say except I left it for the reader's interpretation totally this poem. I know the angle i wrote it from but that won't be poetry if it is not left to the reader's imagination/interpretation.. I welcome and appreciate immensely your visit Brenda and am glad you found some meaning  in this scribble. Appreciate immensely your kind gesture and feedback!
Thank You so much!

KDAmB

Worthy of a cringe KD
but in the Proper admiration!!!
Subtle ease of darkness biting into stillness!!!

awwwe My Friend! such kind words from a poet like you indeed are truly humbling! Your insight is admirable Sir! I welcome and Thank you for the generous appreciation and feedback!

warm regards
KDAmB!
:-)

I can never be bold enough to give advice to one who Writes!!!

consider us 2 of the same mould. If only I could 'write', fact is , and am happy to acknowledge am a scribbler..

Whoa! Shades of that lonesome cowboy shot six tines into the chest by an avenging husband. Laid on the gum tree for all to see . . . Loved it!

Sir Jerry!

Welcome!

wow!! loved your perspective on this... beyond glad you liked the scribble! I am humbled.

Kindest regards
KDAmB!

:-)

The imagery here is spectacular. I loved how the body was described and it sort of floats through the piece.  

Excellent read! Thanks KD  

Al

Indeed it is I who should be thanking you Mr.Poet!

I welcome both your presence and kind feedback Sir! made me more than just smile! Thank You for the honor!

warm regards
KDAmB

Very few words, with such powerful meaning.
My heart was heavy during my reading.
Words....in which I can relate.
((Hugs)) to you, my sweet friend. 💓

Welcome Dear MSHeart!

my friend no need to worry, it's just an attempt at portrayal of a thought that came to mind... thanks a million for the hugs my friend!

Majestically parched 🙏

My oh my! What an example of reducing the poem to two ✌ words!!!  Welcome My Friend, thanks for honoring the scribble with majesty!! 🎉

What a dark and interesting piece of poetry KD, I adored it, what a deep sleeper that man must be.




~anonshadow😏

Welcome dear Bro Anon!!

you never fail to humble me with your kindness! Yes, a deeeeeeep sleeper indeed! nothing but joy to learn you found some meaning in the scribble! Thank You my bro! Much obliged!

There is a certain beauty in death that we can't help but be fascinated by. This captures that perfectly, Birdman.

Ms Gaia!
Truly humbled I am by your visit and appreciation.  Yes indeed there is fascinating beauty in the fact of life that is death. Perhaps it was that that subconsciously promoted me to attempt this. Much obliged my friend. Thank You

it one of those poem that leads you to make assumptions and imagine who is the man, how did he get their, why is he shirtless, is he dead, really dead and if he is how did e get dead - I love poems that make my head work like this - excellent ink :-)

Dave!!!  You nailed it, that was the intention to keep it brief.  Ever so glad you visited and liked the scribble. I can never thank you enough for the kindness and support you've helped me with since the beginning of my journey here.
Thank you so much my Friend! ☺

KDAmB

I vision as I read this.a man took his last peaceful breathes against that tree takin his last rest in the shade and comfort

Your vision is as clear and beautiful as your poetry my brother! No words to express my gratitude for your kindness and support! Always means a lot!!