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Punchy
Have you ever felt
That you’ve had the fuck punched out of you
I mean apart from when
You’ve actually had the fuck punched out of you
The metaphoric can be just as painful
Possibly even more painful
The mental cruelty from others
Intentional or otherwise
The sub conscious mind rape
Repeatedly beats you to a pulp
Never to the point of unconsciousness
How else would you experience
The exquisiteness of torture
It takes a lot of punching
To take the fuck right out of you
I have almost managed it
All on my lonesome
I have renamed my sub conscious
‘Apollo am gonna punch the fuck outta ya’ll Creed’
This feeling only has one solution
You gotta start punching back
I am now ‘Rocky Balboa’
‘Creed’; you won’t make it to the last round
Not this time
you cunt
That you’ve had the fuck punched out of you
I mean apart from when
You’ve actually had the fuck punched out of you
The metaphoric can be just as painful
Possibly even more painful
The mental cruelty from others
Intentional or otherwise
The sub conscious mind rape
Repeatedly beats you to a pulp
Never to the point of unconsciousness
How else would you experience
The exquisiteness of torture
It takes a lot of punching
To take the fuck right out of you
I have almost managed it
All on my lonesome
I have renamed my sub conscious
‘Apollo am gonna punch the fuck outta ya’ll Creed’
This feeling only has one solution
You gotta start punching back
I am now ‘Rocky Balboa’
‘Creed’; you won’t make it to the last round
Not this time
you cunt
Published 17th Dec 2016
| Edited 19th Dec 2016
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2016 9:18pm
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19th Dec 2016 5:55pm
17th Dec 2016 11:18pm
Ate we expressing a bit of rage here David? Lol
It's an epidemic...
You have a way of making pain enjoyable!
JJ
It's an epidemic...
You have a way of making pain enjoyable!
JJ
19th Dec 2016 5:55pm
18th Dec 2016 1:33pm
19th Dec 2016 5:57pm
awe thank you Brenda - sometimes you just gotta punch back even if only for a while :-)
ehugs on their way to you :-)
ehugs on their way to you :-)
18th Dec 2016 9:36pm
Them there are powerful fighting words David...love it
Dare I suggest possible changes....
'Possible even more painful' - change to 'possibly'
'Never to the point of unconscious' - change to 'unconsciousness'
Dare I suggest possible changes....
'Possible even more painful' - change to 'possibly'
'Never to the point of unconscious' - change to 'unconsciousness'
19th Dec 2016 6:00pm
liked your suggestions so much they are now in :-)
thank you for such constructive comments :-)
thank you for such constructive comments :-)
19th Dec 2016 2:49am
Wow David......words escape me of how deeply I have felt your words here.......truly a great ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Dec 2016 6:01pm
thank you so much that really means a lot :-)
ehugs returning to you :-)
ehugs returning to you :-)
