Just Suppose

As poetry is the language of endless impossibilities I'm wondering if your double emphasis repetition is a justifiable move here -- given that "just" is really a throwaway breath that says not much on its own anyway and that less will always say more.
You hit top gear with " a thousand crimson roads" but it was hard for me to cherry pick elsewhere.
JMHO of course .
Best  ~ Abra

Thank you for the advice.  As the writer I was hoping to start each section with something of a ponderous feeling, a drawn-out sort of mumble...  Perhaps I missed the mark.  

A gem.Like the diamond in the hand of the jeweller finely cut.. from the first one felt to be in the hand of a master.: i wish to suggest that  there is no need of JUST when you repeat 'maybe' and 'suppose' so frequently neither of these two need of upport ..Just is a difficult word for the poet as is nearly ( the same meaning) It can dilute intention. However  a gem

Thank you.  lol - Well, that's two for two on the issue of using 'just'.  I'll keep an eye out for it in my other works.  

I personally like the repetition and alliteration that 'just' provides. It adds emphasis and cadence whereas otherwise it would just (no pun intended) be a word. More people than not would say "just suppose" vs. "suppose". Or, maybe it's a woman thing - we tend to drag out our thoughts and dreams in a more languid manner than men, e.g. - beer. burger. etc.  

I really enjoy your work.

Thank you so much for commenting. I really appreciate it.  The poem was inspired by an inner dialogue - much like the kind you would have, say, with a good friend laying in the grass under a starry sky after indulging in too much of something.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  

I personally wouldn't change a thing in this write.  It's absolutely wonderful!  I agree with Ahavati.  :)
Willow

On "Just Suppose" I will have to cast my vote with the ladies.  Though I value the critiques I gain here I really like the way this one tastes so I won't be changing a single word.

And thank you for reading my work, Miss Willow.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

How your words here touch inside me, powerful trilogy of wisdom.


FS

Thank you.

Wow... just wow...

I love the repetition of 'just...' and how they came back in the last stanza!
Such a profound write... a definite must have on my reading list!