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Letting Go

The look of concentration on her face
As she nears the place of total release
Gives him pause to smile
And he slowly backs her away
She moans and cries out for her reward
But he lets her slide back into reality for just a moment
So that it might be even stronger when he finally
Gives her what she wants the most
The only thing in the world that will do right now
Diamonds would not suffice to take its place
And so he buries his head again and licks at her fiery heat
Until she raises her ass off the bed
And he can feel the letting go
And taste it in his mouth
And he smiles again
As she writhes
Now under his soft fingers
He is just a witness to this act of total pleasure
But he knows his time will come
Written by thinlane
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