Abaddon's Whore

Brenda.. simply brilliant.. no one does darkness, like you lovely one.. i've loved the new style of repeating lines.. makes it very lyrical.. into my list it goes.. love you my sister..



Dave

thank you Dave my brother I leaned it from you and Hades ;)

I love you!!!

xo Brenda

It could be a real dungeon invitation in its enticing darkness....

thank you Poets yes there is an allure to the underworld..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...I don't even have words to say how magnificent I feel this is....I am left speechless and will forever be addicted to you and your evil wine....may I come in?

I love you so much!

xoxo Taryn

I love you beautiful you're always welcome wherever our journey takes us.. my immortal Goddess..

love Brenda

Fuck Brenda, this is some epic,
riveting writing that comes across
like an, "Eye-witness Account," and
it might be in some aspects.

It sounds like some of my recent
experiences, (the exception being
fucked in all orifices, which can
also be metaphorical), with my
excursions.

  Great again... Dantalyon

thank you graciously dearest Dantalyon I get a peep show of Hades nightly ;)

love Brenda

Damn, that picture ;-)

Seriously... this was one hell of a dark ride!
I don't think I've ever saw 'forked cocks' in a poem... you rock, dear Crim!

Love, Duende

thank you most graciously beautiful Duende..

love Crim

I'm hooked! I am headed out on that road to
"take a sip of my evil," once there will I even
desire to come back?

aw Jerry your response made me smile thank you.. just a little playfulness on my part :)

love Brenda

I'm ashes from within
darkness incarnate
the devil's whore (I dunno why, but the word whore turns me on)

winged creatures with forked cocks
sacrifice virgin whores
on the bloodied slab of Abaddon (spicy hot!!)

And what an ending!!!
Lucifer cordially invites you
Hades is always open
come on in (Simple and sweetly evil!!)

This is a superlative collection of tercets and quatrains!!

I try to steer clear of Hell but I'll follow you anywhere else Lady Crim.  You're a wicked turn-on, highly addictive and always a thrill to read.  Abaddon's a lucky man!  

good stuff right here(Likes)

Ah, Crimsin, talented poetess, such powerful peotry
in the beautiful shades of darkness...

that's a raging orgy, Crim,
where the whores got to party;
it's a beautiful way to break our hearts...

Yet again you prove that there is much beauty in darkness.  Regardless of which palette you paint with, your art always comes out gorgeous.  :)  Much love...
Willow

This reads like Clive Barker, with its depraved and passionate sensuality and graphic terminology. The images are strong and the narrative voice fearsome. Thank you for the read.

Nice my lovely .. needed this gorgeous piece for my RL..
Appreciate you my dear..
☠Trish

yet another masterful write - when I grow up I want to be just like you :-)

A slice of lust, to slowly enjoy.