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Anticipated Encounter
A knock on the door.
An invitation inside.
I've been patiently waiting
with arms open wide.
A puff of cannabis
A shot of gin.
My mouth is watering
to taste your skin.
Your lips against mine
sends a shock to the core.
My red lace panties fall to the floor.
I smell the scent of your cologne.
Slowly but surely turning me on.
A beeline of kisses down to my waist
To give this sweet honeycomb a taste.
A lift to your shoulders.
A seat on your face.
Permission to explore my most
private place.
My back is up against the wall.
Eat well my love.
Your name, I call.
Before I know anything,
I'm stretched across the bed.
Meanwhile you're still eating like you've never been fed.
Stop before I cum...I dare to say.
Knowing it's far too late to turn away.
I'm trembling, and just before I do....
You stop and tell me to beg for you.
An invitation inside.
I've been patiently waiting
with arms open wide.
A puff of cannabis
A shot of gin.
My mouth is watering
to taste your skin.
Your lips against mine
sends a shock to the core.
My red lace panties fall to the floor.
I smell the scent of your cologne.
Slowly but surely turning me on.
A beeline of kisses down to my waist
To give this sweet honeycomb a taste.
A lift to your shoulders.
A seat on your face.
Permission to explore my most
private place.
My back is up against the wall.
Eat well my love.
Your name, I call.
Before I know anything,
I'm stretched across the bed.
Meanwhile you're still eating like you've never been fed.
Stop before I cum...I dare to say.
Knowing it's far too late to turn away.
I'm trembling, and just before I do....
You stop and tell me to beg for you.
Published 8th Dec 2016
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8th Dec 2016 10:46pm
First of all I would like to say welcome to DUP and second of all I would like to say this was an amazing poem.
It was very seductive and raw and it had such incredible passion.
Well done 👏🏼
It was very seductive and raw and it had such incredible passion.
Well done 👏🏼
9th Dec 2016 5:50am
8th Dec 2016 11:23pm
I love the sensuality, rawness and seductiveness of this piece. Welcome to DUP. And the rhyme makes it all flow very well together.
9th Dec 2016 5:52am
I looked up your flag. It's Lebanon, if I'm not mistaken. "The cedars of Lebanon" is a wellknown phrase. In the Bible. Am I right about which country? I visited the Middle East in Feb-March of 1973. With a day or two in Lebanon. I think it is synonymous with the Phoenicians. In turn, they are the ones who invented the alphabet. Actually the Hebrews (Jews) used the same alphabet. Why the scholars give the Phoenicians the credit instead of the Jews, I don't know.
Your neighbor, Israel, will be invaded by Russia and the Moslem nations after Russia bombs America. How can Russia prevent the USA from retaliating effectively? Russia destroys most of America's retaliatory arsenal before we can launch it. Then the few missiles we do launch will be intercepted by ABMs, Anti-Ballistic missiles So it will be a one-sided war. (Which is supposed to be impossible, according to the M.A.D. doctrine, "Mutual Assured Destruction.") Check out my poems about it - how the American gov't has mis-handled our national defense.
You could say God will punish America for letting the Free Syrian Army get crushed (like the Hungarian Revolution in November 1956, the Cuban invasion of 1961, South Vietnam in 1975, etc). Yes, we have drawn down God's wrath like a lightning rod draws down bolts of power. Judgment is coming soon. My latest guess is late May 2017.
God lets us down each time a rape is committed without divine intervention. He could stop it, each and every time. He lets murders, robberies take place. But there is one thing He has PROMISED to save us from. And that is the Antichrist !!! God will STOP Him after he has taken over the world and thinks himself invincible. How will God defeat the Kremlin? When Russian troops invade Israel, the Messiah will Appear over Jerusalem as Living Light. ("at night there will be light" Zechariah 14.7). The Russian troops revolt against their officers, Zech 14.13; Ezekiel 38.21). They go over to Christ's side (as in Acts 9.3). Christ sends them back to Russia, etc. to "proclaim the glory they have just seen"(Isaiah 66.19). The whole world will have heard about the miracle of God Appearing over Jerusalem. Revolution follows, as nobody is left who will do Gorbachev's bidding. World Peace ensues. And a glorious golden age without end !!! Russia will rule the world for only "5 months"(Book of Revelation 9.5,10).
Your neighbor, Israel, will be invaded by Russia and the Moslem nations after Russia bombs America. How can Russia prevent the USA from retaliating effectively? Russia destroys most of America's retaliatory arsenal before we can launch it. Then the few missiles we do launch will be intercepted by ABMs, Anti-Ballistic missiles So it will be a one-sided war. (Which is supposed to be impossible, according to the M.A.D. doctrine, "Mutual Assured Destruction.") Check out my poems about it - how the American gov't has mis-handled our national defense.
You could say God will punish America for letting the Free Syrian Army get crushed (like the Hungarian Revolution in November 1956, the Cuban invasion of 1961, South Vietnam in 1975, etc). Yes, we have drawn down God's wrath like a lightning rod draws down bolts of power. Judgment is coming soon. My latest guess is late May 2017.
God lets us down each time a rape is committed without divine intervention. He could stop it, each and every time. He lets murders, robberies take place. But there is one thing He has PROMISED to save us from. And that is the Antichrist !!! God will STOP Him after he has taken over the world and thinks himself invincible. How will God defeat the Kremlin? When Russian troops invade Israel, the Messiah will Appear over Jerusalem as Living Light. ("at night there will be light" Zechariah 14.7). The Russian troops revolt against their officers, Zech 14.13; Ezekiel 38.21). They go over to Christ's side (as in Acts 9.3). Christ sends them back to Russia, etc. to "proclaim the glory they have just seen"(Isaiah 66.19). The whole world will have heard about the miracle of God Appearing over Jerusalem. Revolution follows, as nobody is left who will do Gorbachev's bidding. World Peace ensues. And a glorious golden age without end !!! Russia will rule the world for only "5 months"(Book of Revelation 9.5,10).
17th Dec 2016 1:26pm
You set the mood with this little gem!!
It starts with just the right "tempo" and plays merrily along awakening the slumbering senses of its readers, slowly, gently, but surely.
Then, you throw in a tease in just the right place, making readers feel the same "anticipation" you are, in the poem, when we are all ready for you to cum, the music pauses with your lover "asking you to beg."
What a tease!!! I love it!!!
It starts with just the right "tempo" and plays merrily along awakening the slumbering senses of its readers, slowly, gently, but surely.
Then, you throw in a tease in just the right place, making readers feel the same "anticipation" you are, in the poem, when we are all ready for you to cum, the music pauses with your lover "asking you to beg."
What a tease!!! I love it!!!
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8th Dec 2018 4:47pm
I do like your style and way with words... I love how to specially selected a few... this was a great read
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9th Dec 2018 9:35am
Beautiful imagery passion sensuality and so much more...Welcome to DU...You will be fantastic her...keep writing dear...you have very erotic talent...🌹🐺
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10th Feb 2019 5:29am
''A puff of cannabis
A shot of gin. ''
i was sold right there...
love the poem....the intimacy
the visuals....the verbiage..
the pic..
just all around hotness
A shot of gin. ''
i was sold right there...
love the poem....the intimacy
the visuals....the verbiage..
the pic..
just all around hotness
10th Feb 2019 12:27pm
17th Feb 2019 2:18pm
Beautiful ... I could feel the love/lust strings between you being pulled back and forth ... Bless and love ...
17th Feb 2019 2:21pm
7th Apr 2020 3:01am
Where do you go? I like being a reader and getting the female perspective. I am reading this in 2020 but it is still so fresh and new. Your poetry is relevant now as it was then.
7th Apr 2020 3:25am
Thank you very much lol, I'm trying to keeping writing but there just isnt enough time in the day.
