too close yet too far

Glad you liked Bro! Beliieve me I pondered alot over the same, just wanted to attempt to put it in some sorta shape/form, hence the outta place looking first line, didn't wana give two pauses so close.. I might change it to free verse in due course bro. No sugr coating- just joyed by you looking after me brah! Thank You!

done bro! appreciations galore! thanks matey!!

omg...nearly choked on the pizza am eating..thanks bro!! :-))

You two would make a great live act duo!

Well we both are taken otherwise...you know.. I say the Omen are not too bad! lol!

HAHAHAa...see, exactly!  
I'll be your Karl Pilkington.

oi! quiet..don' tell the wifey..i'll be stomped by another heel of vildation.. yes she's perf as she's good at making perforations..with heels!

that'll be some 'company' ;-)

Yeah, you're right, understood exactly what this piece of poetical wording meant . . .

glad Jerry you visited and also glad you saw some meaning in this attempt at poetic scribbling! thank You Sir!

Well calculated and clever deduction. :)

First stanza, third line, first word... separation?

Welcome Dear friend! Thank You , Thank You for looking after my work. You truly are a 'shadowy guardian' ;-)
 Glad you could see some meaning in the scribble! Thank You Friend!

Riding the waves of that pebble <3 Lady

Let's see...if it's gonna cross the sea! Thank You LR for gracing my scribble! ;-)

Love this one!

So much depth in your words... the phrasing is just stunning!

Great write, my friend!

Welcome dear friend Duende!

Thank you so much, you are too kind. Glad you saw some meaning in the scribble. Much obliged

Kind regards
KDAmB

A fine poem KD, you always put things so eloquently. Very enjoyable read as usual man!




~anonshadow😏

Welcome dear bro Anon!! 🎉

You have a very big heart my brother. I am more than glad to see you at my scribbles and to hear that you liked it makes it worth writing hundred 💯 times over.

Thank you bro!

I had a comment on the brilliance of this write all lined up on the tip of my fingers...and then I made the mistake of reading the banter between you and Nemo and my train of thought fell of the tracks!  I enjoyed this one a great deal!  :)
Willow

Thank You dear friend Willows!
apologies for the late reply and also for the banter that distracted you! ;-) Well matey Nemo is indeed a restless sole...i mean soul!
Appreciate immensely both your visit and appreciation my friend!

regards
KDAmB

Ure writing is beautiful it's getting so deep and meaningful

bro...I can never thank you enough for your unflinching support and encouragement! always means a lot bro..your  visit and appreciation of my scribbles. Thank You!

warm regards
KDAmB

wow!, just wow! a very, very clever thought provoking write :-)

Welcome Dave!!  
 
am chuffed to say the least Sir! I thank You for your generous appreciation and visit. Truly honored by your visit and RL add...it is more than obvious why..you're on of the inspirers in my life! Thank You!!