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Torch song
A tremble of my breath, a whispered sigh falling from my lips, it paints your name in steam on the window. I wear rose tattoos with ephemoral petals and demented edges, like lacy lingerie. They taste rudely of seared passion upon my shameless skin, saline like the sea, when you trace them with your tongue.
I try to remain poetic; he wants nothing of that. He craves me in coarse manners, raw like his whores, as if my body was the flesh of veiled dancing girls in a Babylonian temple. If I resist, he may beat me, & perhaps..... perhaps I would blossom, like an orchard of thorned stars, should it come to that.
And after the towering rage of his lasciviousness has been satiated upon a bed of smoldering ash, we warm our bellies on the afterglow. His exhausted lips rest tender kisses upon shuttered lids and this torment of passion that rises like a bird of fire: we belong to it.
I try to remain poetic; he wants nothing of that. He craves me in coarse manners, raw like his whores, as if my body was the flesh of veiled dancing girls in a Babylonian temple. If I resist, he may beat me, & perhaps..... perhaps I would blossom, like an orchard of thorned stars, should it come to that.
And after the towering rage of his lasciviousness has been satiated upon a bed of smoldering ash, we warm our bellies on the afterglow. His exhausted lips rest tender kisses upon shuttered lids and this torment of passion that rises like a bird of fire: we belong to it.
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Re. Torch song
6th Dec 2016 11:57am
sensual, raging poetry, Kas,
twin infernos of love & lust;
how passionately we belong...
twin infernos of love & lust;
how passionately we belong...
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Re: Re. Torch song
6th Dec 2016 12:22pm
Yes, John, love and lust, poetry and passion; they belong.
Thank you, so much for the beautiful words...
Thank you, so much for the beautiful words...
Re. Torch song
6th Dec 2016 11:33pm
He craves me in coarse manners, raw like his whores, as if my body was the flesh of veiled dancing girls in a Babylonian temple. (I'm elated with lubricious joy! That was hot!)
This kind of speaks to me in a philosophically sexy manner.
Very unique!
This kind of speaks to me in a philosophically sexy manner.
Very unique!
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Re: Re. Torch song
7th Dec 2016 00:56am
It wrote itself that way, I suppose, that philosophical softness around the edges.
Thanks for the great comment, glad you enjoyed...
Thanks for the great comment, glad you enjoyed...
Re. Torch song
Anonymous
7th Dec 2016 00:19am
Oh Kasai......that last stanza just took my breath away...even further than it was during the previous lines...loved every single stitch of this....
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Torch song
7th Dec 2016 1:01am
Love to see your comments, Taryn, I really do appreciate them.
So very sweet of you, thanks for enjoying...
So very sweet of you, thanks for enjoying...
Re. Torch song
7th Dec 2016 00:55am
All lovers have their own unique language, Kas. These two birds have found theirs, and it's beautiful.
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Re: Re. Torch song
7th Dec 2016 1:06am
I hadn't thought of it in quite that sense, very wise of you, Ahavati. And yes, I believe it is quite beautiful.
I do enjoy those lovely bits of wisdom you leave on my pages, thank you...
I do enjoy those lovely bits of wisdom you leave on my pages, thank you...
Re. Torch song
7th Dec 2016 1:59am
This song truly torches! yes ma'am
you laid it down my sweet lady, outstanding work here :)
you laid it down my sweet lady, outstanding work here :)
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7th Dec 2016 5:51am
Re. Torch song
7th Dec 2016 2:32am
Kasai, this is stunningly beautiful!
Every time I think it can't get better, it gets better...
That last stanza took my breath away!
Every time I think it can't get better, it gets better...
That last stanza took my breath away!
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Re: Re. Torch song
7th Dec 2016 5:53am
Amazing, Duende, you are such a kind lady. Thanks again for another lovely visit...
Re. Torch song
8th Dec 2016 00:42am
Such an intense piece of beauty. It left me a little breathless. I loved the image of the bird of fire rising! :)
Willow
Willow
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8th Dec 2016 2:14am
Re. Torch song
8th Dec 2016 7:56am
Very sexy ^^
"I try to remain poetic; he wants nothing of that. He craves me in coarse manners, raw like his whores.
Something so animalistic about those lines :-)
"I try to remain poetic; he wants nothing of that. He craves me in coarse manners, raw like his whores.
Something so animalistic about those lines :-)
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8th Dec 2016 8:27am
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9th Dec 2016 10:12am
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9th Dec 2016 7:43pm
Re. Torch song
10th Dec 2016 3:46am
I love the ' orchard of thorned stars ' , I can really picture a woman's voice reciting this piece, it would sound great read aloud.....
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Re: Re. Torch song
10th Dec 2016 8:06am
Hm, never really thought about reading it aloud. Thanks for your thoughts and comment, PR, means a lot...
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14th Dec 2016 7:30am
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14th Dec 2016 7:38am
Re. Torch song
26th Mar 2017 6:26am
And
after the towering rage
of his lasciviousness
has been satiated
upon a bed of smoldering ash,
we warm///////wow
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