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FULL BLOWN A'GOIN, GOING, GOIN, GONE   (11-6-15, Cathedral City ('Cove'), California)


 
i used to  
    be full blown
a goin  going
     goin
til almost
     nearly gone
torn and  
     swept away
from living
     in this world
but now im
     just a blowin
blowing  blowin
     blown
far from there
     back then
beyond
     to here now
yet again  
     alive amid  
the living
     like an ever
flowin wind
     flowing
flowin  flown
     through this
masked illusions
     ongoing
dying song
     ongoin
ongoing  ongoin
     just keeps on
going on
     yet still somehow
feels even
     further lost
here now
     within  
without  
     herein  
this homeless
     home
so changed
     regressively
devolved
     yet despite
my great
     displacement
from this
     temporal
scheme  
     of things
here in this
     temporal  
world
     at least
in seeing
     far beyond
its dying
     blinding veil
i can quietly
     co exist  
transcend
     its pain and  
loneliness
     and in my
deeper
     knowings truth
still bring
     myself  
to smile
     out of wonder
at its epic
     cosmic struggle
to ultimately
     either awaken
or succumb
     back to the
land of
     death
and darkness
     or back  
to vibrant
     life and sun
where in fact
     i already am
sitting here
     writing
this poem  
     from  
now
 
Written by OyateInyanNajin
Published | Edited 24th May 2018
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