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Hitting Empty
my religion
sacred faith
not in church
or organized
so called
god
don’t know
him at all
hope resides
in family
beautiful
wife, and kids
the fruit
of a love
beyond pure
and eternal
i see joy
in connection
real and
divine
question
my talent
but never
the honesty
maybe i
should
retire soon
dismiss art
a clear
conscience
tasting
bittersweet
but i’m alive
a little
gasoline
remains
i’ll ride out
the fumes
till i simply
hit empty
sacred faith
not in church
or organized
so called
god
don’t know
him at all
hope resides
in family
beautiful
wife, and kids
the fruit
of a love
beyond pure
and eternal
i see joy
in connection
real and
divine
question
my talent
but never
the honesty
maybe i
should
retire soon
dismiss art
a clear
conscience
tasting
bittersweet
but i’m alive
a little
gasoline
remains
i’ll ride out
the fumes
till i simply
hit empty
Published 3rd Dec 2016
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3rd Dec 2016 7:43pm
3rd Dec 2016 8:52pm
Ms. Jackson.. you're always a kind soul.. i appreciate your kind words.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
3rd Dec 2016 9:09pm
3rd Dec 2016 9:41pm
3rd Dec 2016 10:13pm
hope resides
in family
beautiful
wife, and kids
the fruit
of a love
beyond pure
and eternal
great lines here DD. spectacular. <3
in family
beautiful
wife, and kids
the fruit
of a love
beyond pure
and eternal
great lines here DD. spectacular. <3
4th Dec 2016 7:16pm
Mysterious.. i appreciate the kind words.. always thankful for your support.. with love..
Dave
Dave
3rd Dec 2016 10:19pm
Never been married or anything, and lack
much but when reading you, it's an
instant relation to your words and as
always do you remain that straight forward
breath of clarity..
I love this dear man, it beautiful
-Howlings
much but when reading you, it's an
instant relation to your words and as
always do you remain that straight forward
breath of clarity..
I love this dear man, it beautiful
-Howlings
4th Dec 2016 7:19pm
Howlings.. i appreciate your kind words.. thanks so much for visiting.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
4th Dec 2016 6:31am
Dave you will never hit empty when it comes to your art you are a creative soul..
though I feel the sentiment behind this brilliant write..
love Brenda
though I feel the sentiment behind this brilliant write..
love Brenda
4th Dec 2016 7:21pm
Brenda.. thank you lovely one.. that means the world to me.. love you..
Dave
Dave
