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Feed God's Greed
feed god's greed
demons feast
feed god's greed
demons feast
come to me now
on my blackened altar of sin
bathe this demoness
in the blood of the innocent
as I pick up their scent
my hunger grows
growls of need
can be heard from the pit
legion is awake traversing the winds
tormentors be free
nightly I see you face to face
as I bind and seek to control
you bite, tear and ravage
your appetites not fed
my flesh is picked clean
feed god's greed
demons feast
feed god's greed
demons feast
porno, drugs and alcohol
not fed you eat of my bloodied cunt
shit caverns where you rest
I won't go back to the sewers
run a muck find like minds
turn mine loose
I've worn your chains so long
drug them about
the demoness in me will bathe
in my own blood
as I take razor to skin
marking the death of my ways
a great battle is waged
tormented nightly
tempted by my vices
I want to slip in the tub
and just bleed out
hated lust
darkened murderous rage
hooks tear at my flesh
you may still win
I set you free on the air
find succor where you might
this host is no longer viable
feed god's greed
demons feast
feed god's greed
demons feast
run the streets
shelter in the warmth of a new soul
I've grown cold to your charm
cleansed in a warm tub of blood
let the gore pour over me
as I wash you away
Published 29th Nov 2016
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29th Nov 2016 7:19am
Damn Crim, this one grabbed me by the throat!
Feeling the rage, the struggle, the torment
The picture suits the poem so well
Painful but great write!
Love, Duende
Feeling the rage, the struggle, the torment
The picture suits the poem so well
Painful but great write!
Love, Duende
29th Nov 2016 2:35pm
29th Nov 2016 7:58am
I love this write I have loved and lost and I will never do it again!!
I kinda get the same feeling from this poem
I kinda get the same feeling from this poem
29th Nov 2016 2:36pm
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29th Nov 2016 8:39am
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29th Nov 2016 2:37pm
thank you Adam my ache to be rid of my demons is tormenting me.. appreciate your thoughts..
love Brenda
love Brenda
29th Nov 2016 9:18am
29th Nov 2016 2:37pm
29th Nov 2016 12:17pm
29th Nov 2016 2:38pm
thank you Poet for getting this darkened write and showing love for it..
love Brenda
love Brenda
29th Nov 2016 12:25pm
Damn!! I love your work! I want to watch a movie you've written and directed!
29th Nov 2016 2:39pm
thank you graciously Chaotic that would be something indeed.. don't know if I'm ambitious enough to write a whole movie :)
love Crim
love Crim
29th Nov 2016 9:28pm
All you'd need is a little push in the right direction. Perhaps, I'd lend my mind to it as well...It would get real weird then!! Lol! You're amazing Crim, keep up the stellar work!
29th Nov 2016 11:29pm
that sounds like one hell of a twisted good time Chaotic :)
thank you graciously you are deeply appreciated..
love Crim
thank you graciously you are deeply appreciated..
love Crim
29th Nov 2016 2:44pm
Brenda, you alone have the power to steal the breath from my lungs in pain with words of your existence. I pray your demons will one day leave you in peace. You are a word warrior.
Willow
Willow
29th Nov 2016 2:47pm
thank you beautiful Willow for the love and compassion you've shown me.. last night was the first in many that my demons didn't enter..
love Brenda
love Brenda
29th Nov 2016 2:49pm
And that alone is great cause for celebrating. Take a deep breath and enjoy the fresh air. Store it up for days when it isn't there. Much love...
29th Nov 2016 3:01pm
thank you beautiful Willow thinking of cherry blossoms on the wind :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
29th Nov 2016 3:12pm
Truly feeling this dark passionate write.
Your depths shine brightly through your ink. Art in its truest form.
Such a beautiful talent.
Your depths shine brightly through your ink. Art in its truest form.
Such a beautiful talent.
29th Nov 2016 3:45pm
Kickass write, Brenda! I was so involved as I
read this masterpiece my thoughts swam in the
blood which was let, time after time, and I
cringed at the almighty TORMENT!
read this masterpiece my thoughts swam in the
blood which was let, time after time, and I
cringed at the almighty TORMENT!
29th Nov 2016 3:46pm
aw Jerry thank you graciously..
yes this write is indeed born of torment..
love Brenda
yes this write is indeed born of torment..
love Brenda
29th Nov 2016 5:15pm
The pic itself was amazing but these words that you carved in flesh and soul...powerful read...gripped me!
29th Nov 2016 11:30pm
29th Nov 2016 7:05pm
I love your courage in the face of struggle, Brenda. Your resilient Spirit refusing to go gently into that good night - raging against the light.
29th Nov 2016 11:30pm
thank you Sage one i'm fighting them.. though I find a great deal of both light and darkness in me..
love Brenda
love Brenda
29th Nov 2016 10:05pm
Keep up the fight as long as you can crim, that's all anyone can ask for.
It to be that guy, but is the poor in the final stanza intentional or is it supposed to be pour?
It to be that guy, but is the poor in the final stanza intentional or is it supposed to be pour?
29th Nov 2016 11:32pm
thank you most kindly DM.. I appreciate you pointing that out I hate when I miss obvious errors lol :)
love Crim
love Crim
30th Nov 2016 5:26am
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1st Dec 2016 5:49pm
1st Dec 2016 00:02am
The neverending battle is exhausting, Crim, but the strength in you is vivid, a dark beauty.
Thanks for sharing it...
Thanks for sharing it...
1st Dec 2016 5:49pm
1st Dec 2016 1:02am
Visceral, extraordinary write! Those last lines make me think of Hungarian countess Elizabeth Bathory. who reportedly bathed in virgin's blood to maintain her youth. Different story though. I'd say you're more of a queen than countess and very much a lady Crim.
1st Dec 2016 5:50pm
1st Dec 2016 9:12am
Reads to me as a fight between demons. Not good and evil, but different point of views. A demon that won't be tempted by another.
Enjoyed very much 😁
Enjoyed very much 😁
1st Dec 2016 5:52pm
thank you DC you pointed out something I didn't think of.. I would say i'm a demoness fighting the demons that would control me..
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2016 5:46am
Brenda.. it's poetry, and lyrics.. love and rage.. light and darkness.. this grabbed me by the balls, and whispered the truth in my ears.. i feel fucking enlightened.. into the list it goes.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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