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The Devil's Grip
Smeared black, swollen eyes
the usual result from last night's cries
Jolting up, feeling tightness in my chest
can't take it anymore, I need to rest
They don't believe me, say it's all in my head
sometimes I think I'd be better off dead
Why is it, I'm unable to catch my breath?
no way to escape, feels much worse than death!
For death would be painless, and all too easy
So stay here I must
where stupid souls, fail to appease me
The only escape is in my dreams
stuck in hell
forever cursed, yes it seems
People say 'cheer up' or 'never say never'
how the ignorant bastards live
Shut up, fuck you or whatever!
That could very well be, the pessimist in me
because I know the devil, has got a firm hold of me
My body is wrapped so very very tightly
how can I possibly think, to try to live brightly?
I know it's my fault, I know it's all me
I also know he'll never let me free...
the usual result from last night's cries
Jolting up, feeling tightness in my chest
can't take it anymore, I need to rest
They don't believe me, say it's all in my head
sometimes I think I'd be better off dead
Why is it, I'm unable to catch my breath?
no way to escape, feels much worse than death!
For death would be painless, and all too easy
So stay here I must
where stupid souls, fail to appease me
The only escape is in my dreams
stuck in hell
forever cursed, yes it seems
People say 'cheer up' or 'never say never'
how the ignorant bastards live
Shut up, fuck you or whatever!
That could very well be, the pessimist in me
because I know the devil, has got a firm hold of me
My body is wrapped so very very tightly
how can I possibly think, to try to live brightly?
I know it's my fault, I know it's all me
I also know he'll never let me free...
Written by
Female_confessions
Published 27th Nov 2016
| Edited 9th Jan 2017
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Re. The Devil's Grip
27th Nov 2016 5:29pm
Torment and anguish inked skillfully, with a tangible rancor. Rather enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. The Devil's Grip
27th Nov 2016 5:58pm
Re. The Devil's Grip
27th Nov 2016 5:41pm
hello new member person
Welcome to my home, it's a really cosy place and their are some good people here.
I quite liked your poem. It's relevant and your rhyme worked nicely.
Enjoy!
Al
Welcome to my home, it's a really cosy place and their are some good people here.
I quite liked your poem. It's relevant and your rhyme worked nicely.
Enjoy!
Al
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Re: Re. The Devil's Grip
27th Nov 2016 5:57pm
Thank you for the warm welcome. I am thrilled to be here and thanks for your comment glad you liked it :)
Re. The Devil's Grip
27th Nov 2016 5:48pm
I'm familiar with these thoughts all too well.
Flawless delivery. Entertaining rhyme scheme.
And this...I think, maybe it's my odd taste, but...this made me smile
People say 'cheer up' or 'never say never'
How the ignorant bastards live
Shut up, fuck you or whatever!
Just the last line, really. Deep, heavy, saturnine write, but with a bit of attitude!
So cool! I'm thoroughly enjoying your work so far. Keep 'em coming!
Flawless delivery. Entertaining rhyme scheme.
And this...I think, maybe it's my odd taste, but...this made me smile
People say 'cheer up' or 'never say never'
How the ignorant bastards live
Shut up, fuck you or whatever!
Just the last line, really. Deep, heavy, saturnine write, but with a bit of attitude!
So cool! I'm thoroughly enjoying your work so far. Keep 'em coming!
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Re: Re. The Devil's Grip
27th Nov 2016 5:55pm
Wow such great feedback coming from you means so much to me so thanks for that and glad you enjoyed it :)
P.s I'm all for odd taste
P.s I'm all for odd taste
Re: Re. The Devil's Grip
27th Nov 2016 6:04pm
Re. The Devil's Grip
28th Nov 2016 3:38am
Re: Re. The Devil's Grip
28th Nov 2016 9:42am
Re. The Devil's Grip
28th Nov 2016 10:26am
When The Devil's grip, holds a poor soul tight, out you need to slip n' seek the light...pay heed
to this advice, for life's only a blip
n' gone as the weak never survive the fight... Yea, your 'darkness'
called to me, so I brought a 'flash
light' lol
to this advice, for life's only a blip
n' gone as the weak never survive the fight... Yea, your 'darkness'
called to me, so I brought a 'flash
light' lol
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Re: Re. The Devil's Grip
28th Nov 2016 12:03pm
Re. The Devil's Grip
28th Nov 2016 2:38pm
Freedom can always be earned. It depends on what your willing to sacrifice to achieve it?
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Re: Re. The Devil's Grip
28th Nov 2016 3:46pm
Perhaps a part 2...a trade with the devil :D
Thank you for reading and for your comment and inspiration :)
Thank you for reading and for your comment and inspiration :)
Re. The Devil's Grip
31st Jan 2017 10:34am
the devils grip is a hell of a thing.
"The only escape is in my dreams
stuck in hell
forever cursed, yes it seems
People say 'cheer up' or 'never say never'
how the ignorant bastards live
Shut up, fuck you or whatever!"
wonderful ;-)
"The only escape is in my dreams
stuck in hell
forever cursed, yes it seems
People say 'cheer up' or 'never say never'
how the ignorant bastards live
Shut up, fuck you or whatever!"
wonderful ;-)
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Re. The Devil's Grip
31st Jan 2017 11:54am
Thanks Ladykilla for the read, comment and reading list entry. I feel truly spoilt :D
...and awesome profile pic btw gonna head over to your profile shortly!😉
FC
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...and awesome profile pic btw gonna head over to your profile shortly!😉
FC
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