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Sad
tonight I am sad
someone very dear to me
is at a crossroad
and there is absolutely nothing
I can do to help
that hurts me
I would give the world
if I could find some way to help
but I cannot
I so wish that wasn’t the case
©November 26, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton
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Re. Sad
27th Nov 2016 4:27pm
I can so relate to this right now. I have a friend who's in the same spot.
Well done, Jerry.
Well done, Jerry.
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Re: Re. Sad
27th Nov 2016 4:53pm
Sorry for your situation, Ahavati. Mine is somewhat better in the morning light. Hope the same for your friend. Thank you . . .
Re. Sad
27th Nov 2016 4:35pm
Re: Re. Sad
27th Nov 2016 4:55pm
Oooh! Thank you so much, Brenda, for your sweet response to my poem. I hope today is going well for you.
Re. Sad
27th Nov 2016 5:37pm
Such moments are hard indeed. Especially when we care as deeply as you do. I hope things come through to lighter skies for your friend.
Willow
Willow
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Willows, I thank you sincerely for stopping by my world. Yes, maybe, just maybe after the survival of the night the skies do seem a bit brighter. I sure hope they continue to clear.
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Re: Re. Sad
28th Nov 2016 2:36pm
Yeah, you're right on with your response, Amelia, and I am grateful you shared it on my poem.
Re. Sad
28th Nov 2016 7:01pm
Hey Jerry......you're such a tender soul and this ink shows that side of you......very deep concern for your friend......but with by their side they will find comfort......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Sad
28th Nov 2016 8:27pm
Thank you, flower, you are very much a giving soul,
and that fact shows itself in your comments in the forum.
and that fact shows itself in your comments in the forum.