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bad habit
The moon tells me secrets
and toxifies them
I take the vow of silence
gaining its trust
It shows me a hidden meaning
consiracy of all
No one listens
still
this tune eternally lasts
"Like infinite faith to a woman
our habits are attached to us
The soul is the first to leave
and then our addictive rush"
and toxifies them
I take the vow of silence
gaining its trust
It shows me a hidden meaning
consiracy of all
No one listens
still
this tune eternally lasts
"Like infinite faith to a woman
our habits are attached to us
The soul is the first to leave
and then our addictive rush"
Published 26th Nov 2016
| Edited 10th Jan 2024
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26th Nov 2016 3:15pm
Our bad habits are us...I began writing the little poems making one point or if possible more very clear...my friend people can't read the long poems anymore their mind won't let them it's a sad fact...the short ones are best..for us..posts now
26th Nov 2016 8:48pm
hey lovepoet , nice to hear you again!
well, my poems are never written while thinking what most people are capable to perceive, I wouldn't care or be affected by that
I need to create art for me and for all, not a specific kind of trend needed by the society at the current time
maybe the real reason in creating a small poem, is that we might be kind of tired too, thought of that?
still I believe it depends on the mood(the length)
thanks for commenting!
well, my poems are never written while thinking what most people are capable to perceive, I wouldn't care or be affected by that
I need to create art for me and for all, not a specific kind of trend needed by the society at the current time
maybe the real reason in creating a small poem, is that we might be kind of tired too, thought of that?
still I believe it depends on the mood(the length)
thanks for commenting!
5th Aug 2017 2:10pm
you know this could be true in my case yes you have to write for you that is the soul of it...when i first started writing i really did write very long poems seems like that was how i done it naturally and i have had to change or learn how to write short poems...i have never even leat many of those get read and they are ok...to me i thank you i just want to touch people i have found if you piss them off...it touches them deeper than if you tickle them
5th Aug 2017 2:10pm
you know this could be true in my case yes you have to write for you that is the soul of it...when i first started writing i really did write very long poems seems like that was how i done it naturally and i have had to change or learn how to write short poems...i have never even leat many of those get read and they are ok...to me i thank you i just want to touch people i have found if you piss them off...it touches them deeper than if you tickle them
26th Nov 2016 4:46pm
You have a way of letting yourself
go, that one just cannot fathom..
WTH, I love this, I centre'stand this
what more can be said.
-Howlings
go, that one just cannot fathom..
WTH, I love this, I centre'stand this
what more can be said.
-Howlings
26th Nov 2016 8:51pm
You're very kind, Howling
Thank you I believe the more we show of us the greater
Thank you I believe the more we show of us the greater
28th Nov 2016 3:36pm
