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Unfinished ~
I dance my pen above the paper hoping he knows my hot ink drips for him
I don't want to die --- or this book to end without loving him, again
The right way
To the end
Despite distance
Despite darkness
The word's I write for him I hope he feels beneath my burning kiss
Every day---
Our heart's shall beat within the pages
Like an everlasting love
I don't want to die --- or this book to end without loving him, again
The right way
To the end
Despite distance
Despite darkness
The word's I write for him I hope he feels beneath my burning kiss
Every day---
Our heart's shall beat within the pages
Like an everlasting love
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Re. Unfinished ~
25th Nov 2016 5:46am
Favourite phrase for double entendre: "hoping he knows my hot ink drips for him".
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25th Nov 2016 12:22pm
Re. Unfinished ~
25th Nov 2016 12:16pm
We only ever get one chance at writing our chapters throughout life... you capture that truth aptly as you eccentuate the underlying truth of "we don't what we have... until it's gone" !
Much time is spent trying to rewrite history, even though deep down we know it'll never be the same.
Some things are meant to be, whilst others will never be... no matter how much you try.
Much time is spent trying to rewrite history, even though deep down we know it'll never be the same.
Some things are meant to be, whilst others will never be... no matter how much you try.
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25th Nov 2016 12:24pm
Re. Unfinished ~
25th Nov 2016 1:17pm
beautifully poetic, Tommie;
these love notes we never stop writing
so they remain unfinished...
these love notes we never stop writing
so they remain unfinished...
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26th Nov 2016 1:35am
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25th Nov 2016 2:07pm
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Re. Unfinished ~
25th Nov 2016 9:41pm
That's some deep heartfelt stuff
I like the way I can feel your sincerity
I like the way I can feel your sincerity
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Re: Re. Unfinished ~
26th Nov 2016 1:40am
So glad my word's came across that way, I was hoping they would. Thank you Fatboy 😊
Re. Unfinished ~
11th Feb 2017 2:33am